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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good start. I'm hoping this will be continued in many, many chapters. Can't wait for more.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I love how cold the characters seem, even while having deliciously hot sex. Excellent start, I can't wait to see more.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol...i like it....good start definitely!
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I thought this story's start was decent enough to earn a review from me. Not exactly sure what I liked about it besides the sex and the affairs scenario, but your writing (in style and grammar) was about as cool as John Shaft. Been awhile since I read adult fanfiction without having to struggle reading it. Great job. Please update.