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Ho! My! God!

That was freaking incredible! Hot and perfect, and mmmmm! Jack was JUST the kind of guy I loooooove! Long dark hair, hot bod, perfect smile, incredible personality...You, my dear, are a freaking genius.

If this isn't the end, then mooooooore!!!!! If it is the end of the story, then still! Mooooore! I demand a sequel!

LOL

Kanashii

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great story. :)

Well, now, this was a sizzling piece worth reading: Classic rock, skilled musicians, groupies, audiences, bars and joints where they mingled, etc. And your writing style bears about as much skill in the way your fingers type it as the mad skills of the guitarist you write about. Slow and rhythmic, sultrily sexy, and mellow in a way. Glad you're not rushing into anything, taking your time with the story. I like the awkwardness of Mary, her fish-out-of-water personality: Clumsy and cool and fresh. That's the best way I can describe it; can't describe this piece in any other way than the one word that defined rock 'n' roll: Cool.
Please continue this piece.

Love your relaxed style of writing and humor,it glows radioactive. I think you might be able to do this for a living. Please write more soon, G

Nice start, I really like this story so far, please update soon