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for Undesirable

by VelvetMace

person L.S.
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay for running from Chaucey :) i'm not a fan... i should be, but I'm not. lol go dad!!!
person kitty08
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow a new chapter and I loved it!!! George was actually claimed as a harem, for umm 6 hours? must be a record for him.. ^_^ ohh I hope Jeffery gets him in the end, though I wouldnt mind Chuck as well. Now I am really curiouse, who will get him first.. and what Chuck will say when he wakes up in the morning!! will he pursue George? most likely.. a bit selfish of George to think he can tell Chuck, that he doesnt deserve an own life, but must rescue abused people... well to answer all of my questions please update soon!!!
person Rosei
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
29/28

Glad that Chauncey is a good looking swine!!!!!!
How ever will he give George up now?!!!!!

Loved the sex/feeding scene!!! It reached such a sublime crescendo!!!!

Hope Chauncey lets the boys see him as he really is,
(but Chuck is such a security conscious vamp!!!!!)

Loved Chauncey's reaction to feeding off of Rod!!!!! ICK!!!!

Will Chuck let George keep his memories of the night?!!! (YES!!!!!!)

Thank you!!!!

R







person Squiggles
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is driving me nuts! i've check everyday since the latest update to see if you've posted more, and then when i find there isn't a new update, i just re-read your last chapter while i'm there. just ...... dying for more.

the feeding/sex scene between them has been amazing to read, and it's still amazing on the reread.

i have no clue what george will do next. not just in the next instant, but also 10 steps from now. though the idea of chuck, george and wally staying together does sound quiet appealing.

george could either leave chuck, or stay with him. and for that matter, chuck might not let him leave, or might not let george stay.

random through RE chucks theories on sex and the human uprising, if vampires didn't lend out "their" humans like dvds, they might have had a lot less resistance. you can't honestly expect people to accept a complete 180 on a deep seeded philosophy. midground is the way to go
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You, are totally mindfucking me with your excellent writing.
Please continue. :)
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, awesome. you should so give us a detailed discription of Chauncey. He sounds kinda hot.
person JtheChosen1
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY. COW.

I'm speechless! Great work!! O.O
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All of a sudden, I heart Chuck! How the hell did that happen?? And I'm glad that his name isn't really Chuck. I like Chauncey way better than Chuck. That chapter was eye-opening. Please update again soon!
person mw0627
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was starting to suspect that half way through this chapter that that was who he was...
person Squiggles
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice twist!!! great update, though now i'm basically gagging to see what happens next. can't wait for more