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Thanks for the update! Love how you took the time to go through harem life and to build up the world too.

Well... shit. That was an awesome chapter! I totally wanted to see Chuck rip Jeffery apart but, alas, I guess I can be patient. I'm loving Chuck's character more and more! Loved this chapter! Loved it! Loved it! Though, I feel so bad for Wally...

i'm unsure if i already reviewed but i don't think i did, but if this is a 2nd review from me, then more for you!!

Chuck...I can't help but wonder if he planned to have George "run off" on his own...ya know, he seems more smart than to do some compulsion thing on George and expect George to take it and roll with it. ;P

But if Chuck really got hoodwinked then haha. I kinda felt George is being weird because...really...what's he gonna do with 1341234 vampires after his ass? Where's he gonna go? I can't wait to see what they attempt in the next chapter.

George's dad is so funky! My dad plays MMO games but he doesn't chatspeak like that. That's really awesome if someone's dad really texted liked that. XD

Now I wonder if Chuck is going to go after George or slink back into the limelight and do his Vestlar thing. Anyway, great chapter!

I don't think I've EVER read a story this well done on any site. It's even better than most books I read. You took such an overdone concept (Vampires) and made it so different, so unique, that it's almost a whole different concept itself! Even though this would probably be an erotica thing, you SERIOUSLY need to consider publishing. I'm not sure if you mentioned it, but I know I would buy every book you did. You didn't make vampires fake, you made them real. Each one of them has their own problems, own concerns, own lives, not just some mindless romance characters that haunt the selves lately.

GAH! This story is amazing!
It's so addictive and the plot is ever twisting and clever, GAH i just can't get out the amount i love you for writing this xD

Just what i was looking for and I really hope you update like...right now ;) *unsubtle hint hint*
Your characters are really well thought out~ and very intriguing, and my GOD ALL THOSE CLIFF HANGERS. I couldn't go to bed!
I just wish he'd go to Jeffrey already, I mean, he's the one who's bailed him out and saved him and everything D:
He seems the right choice in my opinion :)

MOARNAOPLZ
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As always this story is marvelous! I really don’t know what our dear old George is planning. Even if he leaves Chuck, if the guy wants to end the resistance, he will end the resistance. He seems to be the stubborn typ. And he will find a way to track him down. It’s in his profile ;P Where does Geo plan to go? Is he just going to go home and wait for fangs to strike? Or is he going to let Wally pick a fang and give them a call? He can’t call Jeffy, cause Wally wants to stay in Portland. And he doesn’t really want Jeffy, or any other fang either. Does he even have a plan at all? Cause I can see the line that’s building up outside his front door, with their queue-numbers and toothy smirks.

Dammit, if this had happened maybe… five-ten chapters ago, I would have been all over it - cheering the boys on and everything. But… dammit I like Chuck, and I can't help but feel like the Vampires actually have things (at least a few things) right, and Geo and Wally are really screwing themselves this time. Like, really screwing themselves. Not the good kind.

Still though - Go Wally! Shit with the cars keys was brilliant.

And go Geo's dad, too. :D

I cannot wait to find out whether Chuck caches up to them, or if Jeffery catches up to them first… Hell, I just can't wait to find out what happens! *Vibrating with eagerness.*

30/29

George, George, George!!!!!!! Running away, AGAIN!!!!!
And for a noble cause no less!!!!!!
He just can't help being so noble!!!!!!!
The vamps won't be able to not love the guy!!!!!

So, who's going to get to him first!!!!!

The extremely responsible Chauncey?!!!!
The extremely resourceful Jeffrey?!!!!!
Or the extremely besotted Gregory?!!!!!

I heart Chauncey and I heart Jeffrey!!!!!! (Maybe they'll share!!!!)
(After Gregory gets some smexy time with George!!!!)

Can't wait for the coming fight!!!!! (But I will!!!!)

Thank you for giving me something to look forward to!!!!!

R

*Face palm* Gah Geo can't go any significant amount of time without getting himself into some scrape or another. I hope his attempts to jump start the resistance doesn't turn around to bite him in the ass...hm on second thought that might be kinda hot

good chapter!!!
wow. i dont know how you come up with this stuff...
turns out i like chuck alot, he has such a silly first name, i wonder if im pronouncing it wrong?
not sure what george is planning... is he gonna pick jeffery?