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Things have certainly taken an interesting turn! But this chapter confirmed once and for all that I prefer Jeffrey over Chuck. Jeffrey's refusal to submit did it, I think. I'd like to see George's idea put to life, because he is bloody well right! But...Damn, I really don't want to see Jeffrey become a pawn to Chuck. That's too bitter. Like George said- at least Jeffrey treats him like a partner and has seemingly genuine interest in him beyond his blood.

I so love this story :)

Oh how it must have been enjoyable for George to bash them both! I loved it!
And I love your solution. Now the question is : will Jeffrey submit to Chuck?
And what happen next (in either case)?
I can't wait to know!
Bye
M

Go George!!

Great chapter!

Absolutely brilliant. Gotta love it when George hit them with his stick, they didn't see that one coming! :P

another cliff hanger and look near an overlook-sigh - George may just have the right idea- but won't he then be the harem of both?

Oh, Geo hitting Chuck was pretty damn good—Geo hitting Jeffery, right when he (and I) thought Geo was on his side, was fricken awesome. I chuckled. I did. And the rest of it! My god! I'd never even thought that Geo would still want to rebel—I thought it was all stamped out of him and it seemed like a very logical way to end this thing to me! But the twist! I loved it! You really know how to keep your story alive! (I wish I had your talent!) And—even better—Chuck attacked Jeffery again!?? I think I might actually die of suspense before the next chapter comes...

fuck yes another chapter!! *goes to read it*

so excited so excited...

WOOOhoooo!!

I liked George whacking both of them in the head and them telling them off. It was like I was reading a conversation where this one person trying to say things and the other two people are being stubborn and aggravating. Jeffery talks a lot. It's like he narrates the things he says in his head. LOL.

Glad to see George has finally given in (well, not really given in, but stopped running). *ties him to a tree* Hopefully he can keep his mind untampered!

When I read that they were fighting near a cliff I sort of went 0_o. I hope no one falls over...

Now I want to really see George's plan work. I mean, Chuck is great and all but Jeffery seems like someone who is just overall more fun to hang around with. XD Chuck needs to lighten up some. Give him a makeover, have him go shopping at a packed mall, etc.! "I'm a billionaire" way to show off ya? I wanted to throw a rock at his head when he said that. haha.

hopefully they'll all become one big family and no one dies!! family portrait time!! awesome chapter and i enjoyed it!

oh shit...lol Jeffrey's about to to become Chuck very own vampire :D I hate Chuck, but maybe this will help Jeffrey shape up ^^; and way to go George!!! what a smart guy!! LOVE they way you took this story in this chapter :) of course it could all change in the next, but as of now I love where it's going.

Chapter 31/30

Yikes!!!! Great cliffy!!! Chauncey attacks!!!!
Now I'm worried that Jeffrey will get killed!!!!!!!
And now I'm worried that Chuck will get killed!!!!!

Yikes!!!! Love that it all finally dawns on Geo that
he's just been watching a mass exodus from the rest stop!!!!

Jeffrey was pretty honest to tell George that he would condition him!!!!
Vamps are so honest!!!!
(They have no reason not to be I guess!!! They hold most of the cards!!!!!)

Well... now I'm really scared!!!! Death may ensue and George will feel so guilty!!!!
Can't wait to read the next (20?) chapter(s?)!!!!!!

Thank you!!!
R