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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you have Chapter 6 done. Who do I have to kill to get you to post it?
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
umm cool, I like the chapter a lot. But will there be a more intimate relationship between Jeffrey and George, or will it be always an orgie, with the purpose of sweet blood?
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful, I can't wait for the next part. That was delicious!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yuuuuummmmmmyyyy *drool*
Thats was incredably hot! *Gives u chocolates and roses*
Huge kudos for the last chap there . Very nicely written! :)
Thats was incredably hot! *Gives u chocolates and roses*
Huge kudos for the last chap there . Very nicely written! :)
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.
Very nicely done.
You certainly got to the sex, alright, and quite the sex it is. You managed to inject what, on the surface, should be pretty damn hot - beautiful humans, smokingly attractive vampires, and plenty of orgasms all around - with an underlying horror that makes the whole thing really disturbing.
I find the cheerfully ammoral vampires fascinating. I look forward to seeing you flesh them out further, especially having noted the comment in Vestaler's that Lord Jeffrey isn't a bad sort. I suppose "bad" is relative where vampires are concerned. (I, for example, might consider mind control rape kind of bad, but then again, I'm not a vampire.) I have a feeling this whole thing is not going to sit well with George, either.
You're very good at character development. As you can see, you've got me involved. I'm also going to say that I enjoy your pacing. You commented in one of your early A/N's that you worried that it was slow. While I definitely always want more at the end of each chapter, I appreciate that you don't rush a scene, that you let it play itself out. It's a nice build.
Very nicely done.
You certainly got to the sex, alright, and quite the sex it is. You managed to inject what, on the surface, should be pretty damn hot - beautiful humans, smokingly attractive vampires, and plenty of orgasms all around - with an underlying horror that makes the whole thing really disturbing.
I find the cheerfully ammoral vampires fascinating. I look forward to seeing you flesh them out further, especially having noted the comment in Vestaler's that Lord Jeffrey isn't a bad sort. I suppose "bad" is relative where vampires are concerned. (I, for example, might consider mind control rape kind of bad, but then again, I'm not a vampire.) I have a feeling this whole thing is not going to sit well with George, either.
You're very good at character development. As you can see, you've got me involved. I'm also going to say that I enjoy your pacing. You commented in one of your early A/N's that you worried that it was slow. While I definitely always want more at the end of each chapter, I appreciate that you don't rush a scene, that you let it play itself out. It's a nice build.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting setup, with fascinating potential! George is such an anti-hero. Really enjoyed the action. Thanks for sharing - looking forward to Chapter 6. :D
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH GOWD RUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!! ><
Just when he was about to get the hell out! Is he gonna try to run away anyways?? O____O
Gosh, I like Lord Jeffrey so fare! lol ...just so fare 'cause we don't know that much about him yet... *sights*
Anyways, I wonder if they classified if as a good rare or something? Surly he won't be an undesirable anymore right?
Oh well, thanks alot for the fantastic update! I loved it!!! Very well written! *huggles*
Update again asap! I can't wait XD :D
Just when he was about to get the hell out! Is he gonna try to run away anyways?? O____O
Gosh, I like Lord Jeffrey so fare! lol ...just so fare 'cause we don't know that much about him yet... *sights*
Anyways, I wonder if they classified if as a good rare or something? Surly he won't be an undesirable anymore right?
Oh well, thanks alot for the fantastic update! I loved it!!! Very well written! *huggles*
Update again asap! I can't wait XD :D
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this sorta makes me feel like eating cookie dough o.o
blood, cookie dough. Same thing.
I await your next installment...
blood, cookie dough. Same thing.
I await your next installment...
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The poor guy, oh how I can't wait for the next part, keep it up!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Things I love about this story: The premise is imaginative, well thought out and offers all kinds of intriguing possibilities. The plot is obviously well thought out, it builds nicely through the flashbacks and the occasional bit of foreshadowing. I'm dying to know what happens next at the end of each chapter. Last but not least, I love the narrator's voice. George is cynical without being a smart-aleck and his internal observations are funny. He's charming, although he'd probably hate that description.
I look forward to future updates!
I look forward to future updates!