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Yeahhh! Go Geo!
A very fine ending, indeed! I loved how you managed to make it realistic.

I am looking eagerly for the epilogue.
And dare I hope for a sequel?

Bye
M

Damn. Epilogue is good... sequel would be better!

I loved how it ended (though it's not really over, ne?), but I can't help but want to read the rest I want to know exactly how Geo, Jeffery and Chauncey change the world. You've created such an amazing story... I don't want it to end! *Runs off crying.*

But, still, I must thank you for writing this and sticking with it. It is an awesome story. With a bit of editing, I believe it's even publishable!

Wonderful story! This is one that I'll find myself wanting to read again in the future.

I'm looking forward to the epilogue and hoping you include the scene with Chauncey meeting up with Abram...

Hi *waves*

I just found your story and I’m have to say I'm just loving it. I hope you will write more soon, because I’m very interested how it will go on.

Good luck & happy muses

Zhan

OhmyGOD! NO! Do so very much need another chapter! Oh my unholy Hells, I can't REMEMBER the last time I was THIS enthralled with a fic! The characters, plot, EVERYTHING! It's wonderful! Publish this. I am dead serious. You would have so many hardcore vampire fans on your side, and you might even turn a good number of the Twi-tards! Oh my God, your detailed descriptions of surroundings are beautiful and explicit, without becoming boring or leading the reader off topic. Character progression is just fantastic, particularly the GIANT transformation Georgie undergoes, but you've done it in such a realistic manner. It's not a blatant, overnight change for him. It's traumatic, and drawn out in the most splendidly witty and so very HIM sort of way. Everyone keeps their character format so well! Amazingly done, my dear, I can't express how utterly impressed I am with this.

To be perfectly honest, I was not expecting a whole lot when I clicked on the first chapter's link. I don't honestly think I can be blamed for that with all the awful writing I've come across, but I was sorely mistaken. I fell in love with the very first chapter (prologue, really) and have been reading all day. Forgive my lack of reviews. I like to get all the way through what's offered, so I'm not asking ridiculous questions that will be answered next chapter. I pride myself on reading books and being able to guess endings, but honestly, this threw me for a loop. So many twists and turns, I couldn't get enough. The smallest of your characters endearing themselves to me with their unique personality. There is so much to love about this, truly. It's a real treat. I've needed a good vampire fix for a long time, and you've gone above and beyond any expectation.

It is not flattery when I tell you I have only ever been this excited about two other series of books and one that I like better by itself: The Last Herlad-Mage by Mercedes Lackey, Lord of the Rings by JRR Tolkein, and the single being Interview with the Vampire by Anne Rice.

I cannot stop talking about this. My roommates are so sick of me, but I just can't stop. I am beyond excited for the next installment.

Two more things: I'm sorry if this review is annoying or repetitive or anything like that, I'm just honestly gushing my joy out on a keyboard. Second, Jeffrey is my favorite. I adore him. ^-^

Keep up the magnificent work!

Chapter 32/31 (Just more random thoughts!!!!)

So, yes!!! I also loved the big stick and the ensuing whackings!!!!
Loved picturing this little delicious guy thwacking the big bads!!!!!

Love how they are really getting to know
George and what with his blood being soooo interesting
and now this very provocative idea.

He has gone from being undesirable to irresistable!!!!!

(Is that the name of the sequel?!!!!! HA!)

Thank you!!!!
R

Chapter 32/31

OMG!!! Love Chuck!!!!!!
George so has his number!!!!!

So excited by this fight scene!!!!!
One's on top, then the next, then the next!!!!!

Like the way they move, so furiously, then the pause and assessment
then the attack!!!!! Poor Geo, all, "Fuck!!! OMG!!!! I might get hurt!!!!"

And Chuck is a wiley one!!!!! Jeffrey almost fell for it!!! (Like me!!!)

Well, George has me convinced!!!! This all might really work out!!!!
You know... after a lot of sweaty sex... and talking!!!!!

Can't wait to see Jeffrey in submission to Chauncey!!!!! Yummmm!!!!! HA!

You know these boys are all gonna be needing a snack after this fight
(with extra George on top!!!!! Or bottom!!!!! :)

Thank you!!!!
Rosei

OMG! This is so good its scary! Your characters are very well developed and i can honestly say that i did not see any of the twists and turns this story has take. Please give me more. Ill beg on my knees if i have to!

Hey, you're not allowed to do that! I wanted to read more! :)

Ahem. :) Anyway. Great chapter. I think like the sound of where this is going.

I looked over your LJ account first. I think you pulled it off! If George started playing Pete Rose right at the beginning I wouldn't have believed it. Having J & C beat each other's brains in first made it more realistic...yah, yah, yah, like vampires are realistic. But still, I am enjoying your chapters and patiently waiting for more.