rate_review Reviews

Once again, your attention to character building is brilliant. It's probably why this is my favorite story on this site. I am always delighted to see a new chapter. George gets more interesting all the time, his awareness of what a jerk he is points to the fact that he isn't one, really. It's very deftly done.

The building of tension is satisfying, too. In response to your comment on "let down" chapters, they may give you trouble, but the end result it worth it. Both chapters six and seven were toe-curlingly suspenseful. You can certainly trust your talents on that score.

waiting breathlessly, as always,

Trig

NOOOOO! George you DUMMY!! WTF man??? Worried about clients when you're freaking ON THE RUN!! I mean, WTF!! Not paranoid enough by half!! LOL, yes, I did scream that at my computer while banging my head against my desk. (I'm having way too much fun) Not that it really matters in the long run. They probably already know where he is. He's got that little card dealie and they swiped it didn't they? (I know less about this then George does and I'm trying to give him advice...O_O) Are they calling him to trace him, or threaten him until he comes back? Don't you have CALLER ID George???!!! WTF is wrong with you???

Oh well, I'm still rooting for you George. Go George Go!! You should have dropped your name two cities ago! You're no longer George Handle, you're Jorge Fondled. Dye your hair! Put on a fake mustache!! Maybe a clown suit!!! No one suspects the clown!! STOP effing using transportation that requires you to swipe your card and hitch-hike to Mexico!!

Uh oh... looks like the proverbial shit just hit the fan. I feel sorry for poor George.

I really like this story so far, there aren't too many stories that I honestly get excited about when they update, but your's is definitely one of them. I can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter now that Lord Jeffrey knows that George is gone.

Well well, what will he do now?
Hehe he really seems screwed to me :P
Thanks for the update!!

You are a genius. I don't even know where to begin. I still have no idea where you're taking us but we're having fun getting there. The mind control wigged me out. Wow, poor little humans are defenseless. I am totally cheering George on in his escape (although I don't believe for a second that he'll get far). I'm really hating the vampires (not really, its just fun to hate them. . . .okay maybe I hate Jeffy a little. He's a prick.) Please keep it up. This is absolute gold.

I love spunky George and his little adventure! Thanks for sharing him! ;-)

Just brilliant! Fantastic plot, original, hot smex, excellent characterization...this story has got everything anyone could ever want. Thankyou, for sharing your hard work with us. Loves it here! We should be paying for this!

wow... just... wow..... the way u write is totally breath taking! Im already hooked and im not sure if i want to be..... Theres so much angst, which i am a whore 4 lol, bbut i love happy endings and this just has such a dark feel..... O im gonna end up crying arent i lol? Im about ready to bow down to ur awesomeness with how fast reading this story is making my mind move around with all the possible out comes.... Well I hope to c an update soon!!!!!! ^.^

Wonderful! I can't wait for more! I love the fact he lives...lived in Beaverton, I grew up there myself so that was a nice surprise. Keep it up and I look forward to the next update.

Oh gowd do I love this storyyyyy!!!!!

It's too good for words! Really >____<

Well, George sure had a shitty day because of dear-old-Jeffrey!! *sights*

Did he finally escaped?? Or..? hummm

Anyways, I can't wait to read more of this story! And I almost had an heart attack when I saw that there was 2 new chappy! :D XD
It made me soooooooooo happy! LOL

Thanks for the great story! I can't wait to read more! *hugs x3*