rate_review Reviews

I must admit: I love this story. Very, very much. It brightens my day, when I see a new update :)
At the beginning, it took some time for me to get into the story, but as it evolved it became better and better. And it's nice to hear that the author actually has a plan of how the story will proceed and were it will go or, as in your case, already writes in advance. It feels like a kind of promise to the readers that they can rely on being able read the complete story in the near or not so near future. That's very nice because often you have good stories that are never completed and that can be very frustrating depending on how good the story really was. And I won't lie: Not continuing "Undesirable" would feel like a winter depression for me ;) So please, I beg you, update soon, very soon.....

A mostly silent reader

Porn with a PLOT! A real, live, interesting, engaging, and (holy mother) BELIEVABLE plot! Gods be praised, this story is a treasure. I do hope you finish George's story. I've gotten to like the guy.

OMG!!!! This update was AMAZING!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED it!! XDDD

I'm so freak'n exited when I see this story updated! Man, it's sooo good!

I can't wait to read more of this craziness! ><

And Stan, WHO THE HELL IS HE??!!? O__o Is he working for Jeff or for some other Vamp??

Holly, one way or the other, little Mouse is in TroUblE! lol

Anyways, thanks alot for the quick update! I really love it! XD Can't wait for more!

i hate cliffies -.- with a passion -.- even if i do love the heart crushing feeling I get as I read them XP but yay on getting ch10 done. And that smug bastard >( Id so go back there and smack him for being a bastard -.- and even with all my moping about the chapter being over I still loved it :D lol. but I want to know who in the hack he was texting >.< ???? a vampire i know but was it his even is shes a man hater, or one of the other vamps weve come across, or another vamp that hasnt even been spoken about yet? U know... I t hink reading this story has had me on more of an emotional high then living has for the past 2 weeks... Dose that make u just that good, or me just that sad lol? And since that hard to do chapter is done with we get faster updates right? riiightttt?? Pretty please... Q.Q with sugar on top???

"Spunky" George is just proving how much he is "Lord Jeffrey's type of guy"! The cat and "mouse" game probably piques Jeffrey's interest further - and it would be plausible for me if this long leash was Jeffrey's eccentric way of having a little fun. I definitely love the foreshadowing, all your little details, and am enjoying your brilliant characterizations. George is endearing for all his (oh so deliberately crafted) human traits; such as being unable to recognize the urbane tones of the bane of his existence. I've read this story 3 times over till this point now - and love the creativity and intensity. Thanks for keeping the momentum going, looking forward to your next update in George's adventures! ;-)

You know, I was all paranoid and going "They already know where he is!!!1" and now I'm sitting here thinking, "Wait. . . do they even know he's gone?" I mean would they even really pay that kind of attention? I can just see Jeffy, confidant that he is Master of the Universe, going to order his cheeseburger and suddenly finding that the Burger King he just installed has fled the state. That of course assumes George wasn't meant to be locked in that room. But it's still funny as hell to think about.

damn.... lol ok can i just say that I was reading this chapter of the story with 3 friends over here, and they all know im not big on cursing, but the second I read the word mouse I kinda yelled 'Oh Shit no!' and then had t o take 5 minutes trying to justify myself reading yaoi to them yet again lol.
But any way yeah ur right we really would kick there butts and wed laugh while doing it if they werent all powerful in some way lol. I love how strapped 4 time it feels like he is, running from the vampires. I can really feel how pushed 4 time, freedom, and life he feels he is. Hes just so desperate.... God I wish I could write half as well as u do lol!
This chapter was as great as the last one, if these r the side effects of a chapter being a hard 1 4 u 2 write then Im not sure If im more guilty 4 hoping every chapter is hard 4 u 2 write >.< or more quireous as 2 how amazing an easy chapter 4 u 2 write will be o.o lol. Well I hope to c more updates!

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Perfect, made my night to see that you updated. I love how he calls him his little mouse. Keep it up, I check every day to see if more has been posted. I can't help but like Lord Jeffrey. I look forward to seeing what happens when he gets his hands back on him. Keep up the great work.

wow wow.... i dont know what to say. maybe just one thing: please please update soon!!!