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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hoooollly Hell!!! Poooor George ;; It's so sad that he's not free anymore! *hugs him*
I doubt he'll get use to his 'new life' that quickly! I know I wouldn't...
Will his new Master be hot?? LOL I'm curious!
If I understood correctly, George's blood doesn't taste good when he's hurt? But it's really good when he's pleasured, right? I guess that's a plus for him in all this madness! >___< *sights*
I can't wait to read more of this story! It sooo good! I love it! :D Thanks!
I doubt he'll get use to his 'new life' that quickly! I know I wouldn't...
Will his new Master be hot?? LOL I'm curious!
If I understood correctly, George's blood doesn't taste good when he's hurt? But it's really good when he's pleasured, right? I guess that's a plus for him in all this madness! >___< *sights*
I can't wait to read more of this story! It sooo good! I love it! :D Thanks!
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn I feel sooo sorry for him!
I hope lord jeffery get's him back again:
Although a little weird and stuff, He is far better than being sold to some random dude!
Thanks for the update and hope you update again soon!!
I hope lord jeffery get's him back again:
Although a little weird and stuff, He is far better than being sold to some random dude!
Thanks for the update and hope you update again soon!!
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are freaking BRILLIANT. Had me hooked from the first sentence on and I couldn't stop reading since, even though it now IS 5am in the morning. There, see what you did? But damn if it wasn't worth it. I love your style, not to mention the story itself. The concept is awesome, the characters, even the minor ones, are intersting and believable and the whole plot just sucks you in and keeps you reading into the wee hours.
Hope the writing's going well because I can't wait to read on.
~jea
Hope the writing's going well because I can't wait to read on.
~jea
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love your vampire^^
your story awesome.
your story awesome.
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow poor George I wonder whom that guy informs.My first bet is Jeffrey! and nooow there will be a pissed off vampire once he realises that George disobeyed him. How long will this hunt ho on? please please update soon!!!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is one cool story. I almost cried when I had to stop reading to walk my dog. I love the flow in your language. And it's impressive you can make so much happen on a boring bussride. So much angst. Ha ha. Poor Geo. Me, I love every second though ^-^ He he.
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad you updated! been checking everyday... i love how you're fleshing out the story and building this world. and best of all, i love george and jeffrey - yes you're right - i adore jeffrey's flavor of controlling manipulative courtship. and all your very hilariously human subtext narrative from george. love the momentum. thanks again - please update soon... maybe tomorrow? ;-)
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely can't wait for the next part. I still love Jefery, keep it up and I'm looking forward to when Jefery gets his hands back on him.
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sighs with happiness* Poor George! He's getting in deeper all the time. This has been a hell of a couple days - it's hard to believe that only yesterday his life was so normal.
The end of every chapter manages to make my stomach jump or little chills go down my spine. Thank you.
The end of every chapter manages to make my stomach jump or little chills go down my spine. Thank you.
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love George's voice and the tension is just the sort of impending doom variety I covet. You have created a world with so much to learn and yet you release it in bite-size morsels; enough to satisfy and yet leave the taste-buds tingling. Far too often I never get beyond first chapters on this site when they insist on laying out the laws of their world. As far as I'm concerned discovering the world is part of the story. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into the history of this pieace and I am grateful for the chance to read it.