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for Undesirable

by VelvetMace

person jeazard
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so effing much! XD
George's sudden understanding of what he wants to do it awesome, watching him develop is amazing. :)
Okay, running out of praising adjectives here, let it suffice to say that I can't wait for the next chapter!

~jea
person Maddi_Chan
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your story and I can't wait to see what will happen next.
person lakuniko
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating.
I'd review at your LJ. I just pass by here to vote for your story.
It really great.
person J42
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you SO much for the update - inspite of all the holidays. Been looking forward to this. I love Nadette's very clinical assessment of his blood! Hilarious - you nailed it. Forget Nano - you're doing great here. Thanks again!!
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for a good story to follow on here, that was actually enjoyable, and a pleasure to read.

I hope to see many wonderful updates soon.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more and I truly hope that Lord Jefery gets his hands back on him. Keep it up.
person jeazard
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so freaking much it's beyond words.
George's life is slipping away from him at rapid speed and I can just FEEL it.

Wow, can't wait for the next chapter! :)
person kitty08
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what an unexpected turn of events!! But I thought in the end George will go back to Jeffrey? It doesnt sound like that now... well I am looking forward for the next chapter! please update soon
person Avernion
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Geo has been violated! And now he's going to be sold of? It's just not his week. Laugh. I find myself missing lordy Jeffy. It is much more fun when the violater enjoys the violating. Oh well. I'll just have to wait. ^-^
person trigana
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If only I didn't love this story so much. If only I wasn't so fond of stubborn, complex little George. You see, then I wouldn't keep track of things like the fact that you usually update weekly, but it had been two weeks. Frankly, if this was a novel, (as it should be, you know, it is certainly good enough) I would have gulped it all down in a day.

I certainly understand life getting in the way of writing, though, know that no matter what your pace, you will always have a fan here.

Those last two paragraphs were particularly lovely. Very poignant.

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