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for Undesirable

by VelvetMace

schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate Nadette, good to see Jefery back though. Hope he gets him back too! Keep it up.
person Rosei
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I forgot to say that I totally loved the internal dialog of
George discussing his bowl shaped hair cut and the hiding of his looks and how it
all ended up being a stupid rationalization or something... (and I am no doubt totally
slaughtering your words here), but, his thoughts were priceless!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! (I just thought I'd throw that one out there!!! HA!)

Thanks,
R
person Maddi_Chan
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas to you too!

Awesome update, as usual. I really hope Jeffery gets him back, I'm really beginning to like him. T
person jeazard
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dread the end of each of your chapters, the thought of having to wait for the next one is horrible. XD
Soooo, who's gonna get the tasty little human?
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O crud that was an awesome chapter!!! Go Jeffery, win back your human!!!
person Saminada
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas indeed! I LOVED ur pesent! LOL :D

U can't believe how I'm happy to see Jefrey again! hihi He's just sooooo 'cool'!!!

And should we worry about that Gregory dude? He looks a bit crazy! I've yet to decide if it's a good kind of crazy of not! >>

Oh well, I really can't wait to read more of this! It's fantastic! *hugs*
person Rosei
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yah!!! Jeffrey to the rescue!!!! HA!!!

That Nadette is perfectly revolting!!! In a "I have to be in control of everything,"
kind of way. Love George!!! Love the way you are revealing the culture of this world.

Thanks,
R
person Laiko
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Creative story line. Great choice for a first-person narrative. George is a freaking hoot! Can't wait until he meets his buyers. If they don't gag him, we're in for a show. Keep going - I'm loving it!
person Saminada
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwe poor George! ;; Now he's all pretty to meet his little 'friends'... *sights*

He's a bit depress with all that's happening to him! Ah well, who wouldn't be?? >>

Knowing him, he'll probably try to run away again but for some reason, I highly doubt that he'll succeed this time...

Gezz, what else can I say other then I CAN'T WAIT to read more of this awesome fic???! :D
You're really killing me...very slowly....lol XD

Anyways, thanks ALOT for the update! I'll be around for more!
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, keep it up and I look forward to more!