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I love it this is a great story so glad i found it reallt cant wait for the next chapter

I'm glad you opened up the reviewing here; I almost thought George had found someone who might see things his way with the pregnant white, but I guess it was better he didn't share; thanks for the update!

*Is speechless* ;; I LOOOOOOOOOOVED the update! Well, there isn't one time that I haven't enjoyed ur update sooo.... Yeah, I'm loving it! :D

And I can't believe that Greg's the first one to go! >> I hope we'll we see Jeff again soon! (he's my fav Vamp!)

Also, I was wondering if ALL the vamps are really going one at a time to 'taste' George?? Isn't that a bit too much?! Poor dude! X_X lol

Anyways, I guess I'll see what will happen in time... ;]

Again, thanks ALOT for this AAAAAAAAAWESOOOOOOOOOOOME story! *hugs x3*

Yay, awesome new chapter!
Also: looking forward to the porn. XD

After reading the first paragraph I knew I would love this one. It really hooked me. I love that your vampires are complete dicks and that the main character is capable and defiant. The mindfucking is a great way of allowing for hot and somewhat consensual fucking without making me lose respect for our hero George. I love the dry humour, and the various references to internet memes made me giggle.
In short, you are a great writer and your story made my day (or night, since I stayed up far too late reading the whole thing). Now I can only scream for moar.

Just what I needed after a very long day at work ^_^
I'm obviously looking forward to the porn, but this chapter was interesting too,
I liked the human interaction George got with Valentina. Learning more about
Patrons is a thumb up too.

So this is me being overly dramatic.. "If you don't update I'm going to die!" Like I said, dramatic.

Though I won't die (hopefully) I would love to see an update. I'm in love with this story. I understand if you have writers block or something (I've had it for years) but here's me hoping that if something is distracting you from writing you get over it soon.

Thanks for the update!! Love the background you bring to the story to develop this world. George's intricate mind is just hilarious; love the way you weave it all together. I miss Jeffrey, of course, but I'm definitely looking forward to what your mind makes of Greg (our Hollywood vamp)!

And of course, it had to be Greg. Laugh. Poor Geo ^-^

Far out. This is brilliant,you are a Goddess and I am your devoted disciple. I thought the gore was really tastefully done with the vampire revenge. And it was just sinister enough to remind me that this isn't Twilight, full of little sugar coated vampires (thank God!) I mean really, they are demonic kinds of things aren't they? They have to be sinister and I think there is nothing more frustrating than going to see a vampire movie and it turning out to be some emo version of Gone with the Wind (yeah, I wasn't impressed with Stephanie Myer lulling us into a false sense of security. That was such a bad movie lol...and story for that matter. Even Buffy is a little truer to the vampire horror thing than that lol) But this? perfect! You have this tension going the whole time where I am like...wow...evil muvvas! Run Georgie baby! But the vampires don't actually do anything to justify why I feel on edge about them. There's just like this threatening atmosphere going the whole time that I think would have to be what it's like for Georgie. Like an underlying stink.

Then all of a sudden, just when you are thinking they really might be a little civilised, albeit scary, they go ape shit and tear one of their own apart and I'm like...wow...THAT'S why you don't trusted them, Georgie, RUUUNNNN!!!! hehe. It's kind of like being in a cage with a tame lion. Vampires are never really going to be tame. Although, Jeffrey would be worth taking testing the theory on hehe, I love him so much lol. Cheeky bustard lol.

So yeah, just brilliant, from start to finish. This story is absolutely magic and so well done! Like my other favourite stories in this section, I feel like I should be paying you to read it. Freaking brilliant. You rock, thanks so much for posting it for us to read :D