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by VelvetMace

person Seryllis
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. It is so very well written and there is such a smooth flow in it. Wonderful. Great to read. And finally Jeffrey is back. And I'm curious how Jeffrey will get his hands on George again. Seems like he has some kind of plan......
I can't wait to go on reading, unfortunatelly I have to.....
Keep up the good work!!!
person Kage
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to log in but I can't wait to find out what happens, keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You really got me going with this one. Nice work.
person jeazard
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful as always, and I think Jeffrey just became everyone's hero. Hopefully. XD
person Tink
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update? I check this nearly every day. I love it!
person absrip
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!! This is one amazing story you got going here:P I really love the whole new world you've build up, it feels very real and well thought out. It's a hot, well-written and very enjoyable read, I truly hope you'll continue cause I really, really want to know what happens next! Best story I've read in a long time;) Thank you!
person poppy426
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should totaly have gregory be with george, they are so hot together
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this story. Thanks for updating so quickly.
person tf
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gregory definitely gains brownie points for who I want to win after that-thanks for the update!
person jeazard
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Let me just say that right now I have no specific preference between Gregory and Jeffrey. In fact, I like the former a lot. XD But that might just be me liking the porn. ^^;;

Twilight: Right choice there, it only gets worse, not better. -_-x

As for waiting for each new chapter, I have this silent agreement with a friend that whoever notices the new chapter first has to alert the other to it. XD