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for Undesirable

by VelvetMace

person jazz
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited! I cant believe he actually got out of there. I cant wait to see what happens next! I really enjoy this story, thanks for writing =D
person J42
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a fucking glorious update!!! I loved the escape scene. You are so, so amazing words fail me. I'm so excited about Wally on the run - and I'm so worried for dear, dear Jeffrey. They did it! (And then they drove in the wrong direction? How cute. ;-) ) Thank you so much!
person jeazard
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, this was brilliant, this was awesome, it was fast and exciting and WOW!
I'm thrilled and wibbly and feel like laughing out loud. XD
I don't know how you do it, but you do it exceptionally well.

~jea
person maloanne
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vow!!! Unexpected, but I loved it. And now, I guess, a macth : Jeffrey, and every other Vampire will try to find George, And G will try to evade all of them, even J... Power against the wit given by fear and desperation...But then I may be vrong, I was for this chapter.
So now I will try not to eat my nails to much, waiting for the next chapter.
bye
M
person Rosei
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Love the whole background you've imagined
and George's history with his mother's help,
struck me as really funny!!! (Right. What does that say about me?!)

Love Georges initial resistance and ignorance
of his situation and the ensuing trouble and capture of his person.
Love the glimpse from Gregory of the sublime feelings the vampires
have for members of their harem! WOW!

Love the cleverness of Lord Jeffrey.
You can take the cat out of the jungle,
but you can't take the jungle out of the cat!

Thanks,
R
person Finnel
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
its going to be a full out man hunt next... poor george...
looking forward to the next chapter!
person kiix
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Go George!!!
person Avernion
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. This chapter had me so stressed and nervous. Chuckles. He made it. Yay!

How did Jeffy do in the match, I wonder. It would be sad if he lost everything he had :'( But, ha ha, Geo really thinks he's free? The sweet, sweet boy. Jeffy will find him, no question about it >:3 So evily planned. He he he hee.
person tf
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I hope Jeffrey's ok and didn't lose much to Nadette; he was so nice to leave Wally to help George...hope they stay free for a while; thanks for the update!
person Tink
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was stressful. I swear, I check this story every morning to see if you've updated. I'm completely addicted!