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for Undesirable

by VelvetMace

person papu
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this. When's the last time you've updated. I tell you it's not often enough. I don't like vampire stories, the whole blood thing is sort of gross and most stuff has been done, but this story is pretty darned innovative. Update xoxoxo i luvs you oh wonderful wondrous authoress you xoxox
person kiix
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon...please, The wait is absolutely excruciating.
person WingGoddess
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is the best vampire fic I have ever read, and I thank you for writing it. You must have a busy life, but I can't help begging for the next chapter to come out soon! Please! I love your story. I want more Jeffy :P
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cuteeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!
this story totaly cooooooooooool!!!!
owh...please update soon!!!!

please-please-please!!!

XDD

Love you!!!!

ahhhhhh...update sooooooooooooon!!!
person trigana
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another marvelous chapter. Jeffrey is getting more interesting all the time, I'm growing quite fond of him, predator though he is. He is quite sure that he's George's patron, but there is another claim that has yet to be heard from - everyone seems to be assuming Lord Chauncey is out of the picture. I do wonder. However the way it ended, that was glorious indeed, freedom and Wally, what could be better? I'm was left feeling all exhilarated.

But...it occurs to me that, if I've tracked George's travels correctly, they are heading in the wrong direction. Oh dear, little frission of worry there.
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I look forward to more. I love Jefery. Keep it up!
person JJ
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh this story is amazing and intense. I LOVE IT! Your writing is also amazing! Keep up the good work!
person Maddi_Chan
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He's free! Hell yeah! I really felt bad for his situation and I'm so happy he finally was able to escape! I hope his sire is okay. I hope he and Wally will be fine as well. Can't wait to read more!
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go George! Now, Jeffrey's assistance was unexpected, in a very good way. In all honesty, I didn't think he was that possessive or kind, but it's good to see new sides to him :)
person amy
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! Especially the end where George is running and he's savoring his freedom. that was really beautiful. I look forward to seeing how (and if!) things work out.