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for Undesirable

by VelvetMace

person womo
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woohoo!! i forgot about the chastity belt and cuffs.

wally and george love. so cute. george you air head.

thanks for the description! i have ton of work to get through in the coming week, but i should have something done by next weekend!! awesome chapter!!! george would make an unstably cool resistance person. i just hope wally doesn't get hurt. wally is so precious.
person Elin
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, an update! It makes me really happy that you're continuing this great story. Loved this chapter, it was a nice break from the vamps. It was great getting to know Wally a bit more, and the ending really put a twist (a very good one, and not completely unexpected) on their relationship.

I'm excited to know more about this resistance, and hope to see some vamps going down in the future. I'm rooting for the human/human relationship here, and while Jeffrey may not be all bad I have trouble picturing him and Geo in a relationship based on equality. Maybe George should wear a tinfoil hat =D.
person kristina
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHH!!!!! *FLAILS* OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! George is gonna be like Sojourner Truth and Frederick Douglass and Martin Luther KING!!! LOL Oh god I hope all those vamps get their comeuppance!! I belong to a few yaoi communities so dont be surprised if you get a whole lotta new readers cuz i'm gonna rec this thing like crazy!! Needless to say I expect an update soon. (hehehe)
person lakuniko
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for update.

I truely like this story. It really awesome.

I love your Greg.

I like Will too. He such a great freind, but I really hope that Greg will end up with powerful Vampire not Human.
person maloanne
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter!
I bet Wally has a big crush on Geo. I kind of doubt it will appreciated by Jeffrey.
And by the way, I hope he is alright, he does have a runaway Geo to capture (and seduce, I guess) :-) .
Good luck in your tought RL.
M
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful yet again, keep up the great work and I look forward to more!
person aukuroku
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter wasn't a late down at all! I must tell you you definitely had me fooled for awhile that Wally and George were just really good friends. I never saw the whole Wally has the hots for George coming! I mean wow what a twist. =) I absolutely cannot wait for your next chapter! Oh and btw this is literally the greatest story I have ever read on this cite and it definitely makes my top 7 of things that I have ever read (This story is putting up some serious competition against Twilight and Harry Potter). You should honestly consider getting this story published it's absolutely amazing.
person Perona
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your updates are always worth waiting for. I almost feel bad for hoping Jeffrey catches up with Geo and Wally--since Geo's all gung-ho about human liberation. I absolutely love this development between the boys in this chapter--delicious! Can't wait for more, this story is amazing.
person jeazard
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For being uphill this sure was a lot of fun to read, and the Wall/Geo part was just sweet! =D
Thank you so much for yet another chapter, hope your RL has calmed down a bit.

~jea
person kiyoai
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The relationship between these two characters is just so sinfully delicious, I'm going to go as far as admitting that I'm addicted to reading this story. In the creepy-stalker sort of way. Yes, be afraid. I swept through the chapters like mad the moment I found it--I know, that's a bit obsessive, but what's a girl to do when she finds something this good? I love it! Technically George owes Jeffrey now, as he's helped him escape, so I can't wait until he collects. Muahaha.