rate_review Reviews

Oh! This is WONDERFUL!!! I was jsut browsing at random - quite bored - when I stumbled upon this. And it's BRILLIANT!!! I love how every character has a name, a face AND a personality, a lot of writers forget that crucial little detail. My only critique is that sometimes your grammer seems to... die. Like, it's perfect and then suddenly you had a typing seisure? I don't know. I do knowb that it's not terribly distracting, and I also know you're certainly not doing it on purpose; just something to keep an eye on in the future.

My favorite part had to be when Geo FINALLY got that chastity belt off - and then Wally went down on him. My heart nearly stopped I was so focused on what would happen next. Geo was jsut so frustrated, what with having been brought so close so many times and never allowed to come - I almost shared his relief in that restroom. Wonderful writing! Amazing!

I cried when I realized i'd run out of chapters.

Anyway, I'll be here when you update - please do so soon. :D

Great, great, great as always! ^^ I love your writing! It's so refreshing compared to the more... unoriginal stories I've read. Oh, I have a question. Will we ever see Lord Marc again?

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO great update. the future is completely unpredictable at this point. i have no idea what will happen lol. i kind of see a possibilty of wally and george ending up with jeffrey, but i'd definitely wouldn't mind some wally and george action. they were so cute together in the last chapter.

Thanks for the update. I was thinking of this story just this afternoon, and then what happens. An update! Yay me X3 I can't wait to see what happens next =^-^=

I happened to see this story on the updates page of the Originals section. I decided to click on it randomly. After the first chapter I was hooked. Then I clicked on your name to see other stories and realized that I recognized it from reading your FMA fiction of livejournal. No wonder I was hooked! I really enjoy your writing. You portray Geo's confusion and fear well.

Oh shi.. Jeffrey is coming! The chase is on! Don't worry if it feels like "biking uphill", I really loved these later chapters. And Wally is awesome, as usual.

Thanks a lot for update. I really check your fic page everyday for it.
your story kept exciting.

I totally agree with others that Wally is cute. and Jeffrey's letter so funny^^

Up-hill or not, it was a beautiful chapter!
That letter from Jeffrey was brilliant, simple as that. I adore that man. XD

It was wonderful to see that you updated, keep up the wonderful work!

Oh god I'm glad that things didn't stay awkward for too long between those two!

Wally is just so damn cute!! *hugs him* lol And I absolutely love George too! Waaaa ><

Thanks alot for yet another fantastic update!! I really loved it! *hugs*

But now I'm wondering who would've won the fight if Jeff hadn't declared himself! Is he stronger then Nadette?? But anyways, it might just be a good thing after all that it happened like this 'cause I don't think that Jeff would've had an easy escape with all those other Vamps around concentrating on the fight!

Thanks again for the story! I can't wait for more! XD