rate_review Reviews

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Can I just say that I love Jeffery? Alos, I just read this whole thing in one night, and now I'm going to have to check for updates like I have OCD. Err, and one more thing... sorry if I post this review twice. I think I may have done something weird. Anyway, I LOVE this story. Thanks for sharing.

Just found your story and I am in LOVE with it. I spent an entire day reading all of the current chapters. I love the exchanges between Jeffrey and George and the sex scenes are very hot. I love the snarky attitude of George and just, everything, haha. Each character has a very distinct personality and there is something captivating about your writing. Even when they're just driving, I have trouble stepping away.

I can't wait to see another update. As much as I love Wally, their recent direction just SCREAMS trap. I'm hoping Jeffrey pops up soon, he's quite charming.

this story is practically fun and hell i like it. Hope you update soon, can't wait till see what happens. Very curious little girl here. xD

Ha! Totally reminds me of those never ending road trips around the Midwest!!

Wrong direction?! You end up in IOWA!!!
Trying to get out of Kansas City?!
A few trips around and around that circular freeway,
then one finds their way!!!!

The billboards are different from your story though!!! HA!!!
(Favorite billboard were the ones leading up to Wall, S.D., from the East!!!!
"FREE WATER AHEAD!!!"

Scary how Wally totally caves to his Lady, but I guess that's cause he's so scared!!!!

Can't wait to see what kind of fire you're going to put them through!!!

Thanks!
r
R

wow!!! update thanks you so much.

*head-desk* Gah Wally and Geo are rubbish at escaping. For all George's talk about the underground resistance you'd think he'd have some idea how to lay low. I wonder what's gonna happen with Geo when the Vamp Lord gets a look at him. Trouble trouble. I hope Jeffrey makes an appearance soon. Anyway, I love love love this story. Can't wait for more!!!

Yes, an update! But damn, you're leaving us with a cliffhanger again! Still love your story, and it's the only reason I visit aff.net these days. Definitely the best story on here.

I'm a bit worried about our boys though.. like George, I have a bad feeling about this new turn of events. Arrgh, must have new chapter!

Oh! An update! I wish you could have seen my eyes go huge when I saw the update on ElJay. I nearly stopped breathing. I knew it wasn't abandoned, but to have a new chapter confirm the story's still going strong... my expression must have been comical.

Patient I can be - with a story THIS good I can ignore missing commas, my mind just fills them in as I go mindlessly on all caught up in the plot. The only mistakes I noticed in this one were a few missing "the's"... But again, hardly distracting from the story. And if you're planning to go back and edit later, that just gives me an excuse to go back and re-read it all over again! Win-win! :D

As for the overall chapter: Oh... why do I get the feeling Geo's walking into a big effing trap? I don't care how much Wally likes his patron... this isn't going to be good. I'm almost dreading the next chapter now even as I want it now!! I also highly enjoyed how Darlene's a handicapped vampire, that was a deliciously funny twist - and highly original. Just... don't let them be caught by Jeffery again, please? *Crosses fingers* Oh, and Chauncey? I hate you for being so mysterious. Every time he's mentioned I get the image in my head of an old but ridiculously powerful vampire who teeters on the edge of insanity. When he gets his hands on Geo - and I know it's going to happen - ... I have no idea what to expect!!! Gaaaa - The suspense!!

Ohhh, I have this sinking feeling in my gut that they've been tricked. Xo That would be fun to read though :D I'm such a bad supporter... He he he...