rate_review Reviews

YEAH! Lord Jefferys coming back! How wrong would it be of me to hope he gets his mouse and has a fun bout of torture? yeah twisted i know but hey im not the one writing this and putting the thoughts in my own head now am I lol. But back to the story :P Man how do you always have me in pins and needles so easily??? I found myself yelling at my computer screen a moment ago over how my guys were acting lol. not my smartest moment... U know im normally depressed (granted its a good angesty depressed lol) after i read a chapter of this story, but to know our jeffy boy is coming back just put a little smile on my face :) I cant wait for an update now!

It was good to see an update, I look forward to the next. Defiinately looking forward to the return of Jefrey. Keep up the good work.

Oh lord. Short but so, so sweet. I still absolutely love your portrayal of every new character - especially the nicknames you have Geo give to them. Officer Douche. *Snickers*

The sex? That was just hot. I was especially delighted when I realized you'd done away with the nasty habit of insinuating 'female' ways into your male characters. Like making it slow and careful - they're men, they just want sex however they can get it. That, coupled with the desperation of Geo and Wally... it was just hot. And you wrote it brilliantly. I didn't even see it coming, as soon as Wally wrapped Geo up in the shower, my heart jumped into my throat. *Really? Now? Oh hell why not!* I hate it when you get so used to sex that you can predicts its coming from three paragraphs [or chapters] away. If there's one thing about your story-telling, it's you're talent at keeping us reading on our toes.

I know I'm being pretty garbled right now, so I'll stop. But I loved this chapter [and the entire story so far] so very very much. I'm sorry it took me so long to notice you'd updated!

I'm so glad to see an update for this story, I'm so addicted! I really like where this is going and the new town does seem creepy*shivers* and yay to hear that Jeffrey will be back cause he is still my fave vamp in all of this:) Your writing is as always quite addictive, thanks a lot for sharing!

Agreed on summer being incredibly busy when it shouldn't be!

And this was great to read, so awesome work!!!

Another cliffhanger... ah! Thanks SO much for the update! Really needed it. Enjoying the twist you're bringing in with this religious right. And missed G so much. Yes, definitely pining for Jeffrey... and wondering about Chauncey. :-)

Alright, I want some more Jeffry :) i can't help it...he's too delish. I imagine him and Chaucy cooking up some scheme to send things back to the days of the hunt- perhaps Chaucy is the rebel guy?!! that would be sooo bad ass...hahah anyways, I can't wait to see what's next : ) so long as Lesbian-Vampire-from-hell doesn't return too soon, or at all, i'll be a happy reader ^^; just saying...haha

Yay! I love this story so very much, I was embarrassingly excited when I saw the update. Ah Geo and Wally are so cute together, but I still miss Jeffrey or Gregory, actually I don't know who on the vampire team I'm rooting for, but it is just so entertaining reading about Geo putting up with them! I do hope they make a break from the Vampire Jesus cult they've stumbled into though. Can't wait for more!!

Hey there! Nice story! (Although it's a tad draggy but I can deal with that.)
Man I hope Jeffrey hurry up and heal himself. As much as Wally saying all thing good about Dingaling, I have a feeling she isn't going to be all that happy seeing George. And Fancy Trousers sounds rather ... suspicious and not good?
Anyhow, can't wait for updates!

ey ey! don't know if you got it, but i sent pictures of the fanart (i have my scanner but it's not hooked up yet) to your livejournal email (only e-mail i could find). just lettin' you know! hope you're doing well!