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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That had to be one of the best vamp stories I've read in a while. And that ending...me likes. Marvelous job! But you know what, it kind of begs for a sequel, now I'm curious if they can implement a constitution...or start world war 3 (4? O.o Did the Coup count as a war?).
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a fucking amazing story. If it didn't have so much lovely and hot sex in it, I would suggest you publish it and let schools assign this story to their high schoolers in English class so they can analyze the hell out of it. This had the same similar "Utopian Society" theme, but it was so interesting and much more fun to read than those other types of books like "The Giver" or "1984". It also had a happy ending that most of those books don't have. I hope you understand just how ridiculously amazing I find this story. I also hope you give yourself a good pat on the back and a cookie for the great job you did.
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October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God, this story was amazing~! Written in such depth that I couldn't stop reading it, I'm happy that even up to the end, Wally got to stay with George! Thank you for writing such an interesting selection of detail!
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October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your writing style and how created the main character's personality, especially his humor. Here I am, supposedly studying for Japanese finals the day after and yet I'm reading your story, which is obviously in a different language not even my native one. That's how much I like this so I'll be reading on.
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. Wonderful!
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lame.
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just perfect ! I have nothing else to say. Haaa, just one bad thing... Why is this story not edited in a paper version ? It's the kind of really good writing that you want everywhere with you :) Really, a big thank you for this wonderfull piece ! You have aaall my love **
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. It was such a magnificent story and awesomely written. Hi-five! Do it again; Encore.
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, and I'm only on chapter 11, but I gotta say, so far, I HATE these vampires. Every single one, and everything they stand for. This story has to be one of the most unique and original vampire stories I've ever read though. I really have absolutely no clue how this is going to turn out. I'm kinda scared, haha.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is one of my favorite stories ever written I loved al your twists and turns juts which it last longer but it made sense where you left off. Though i jhope you write something like it again. thank you