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for Undesirable

by VelvetMace

person Avernion
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohooo, a new chapter. I love this story <3 I want to see it finnish but I'll be sad when it is gone. This is one of the gems I always keep my eyes open for. Poor Geo. It doesn't seem to be any out for the guy. At least he has Wally.
person ReighChama
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank goodness

and Happy Thanksgiving [ from Toronto!!]

just fricken go back to jefferey I don't get why he wont. sdkfcu dh df like a petulant child he is acting at times.

OMG so chuck

makes me think of church norris.

vampires don't bite chuck norris, chuck bites them [ with a resistence >.<] okay so that is my energy coming out right now.

goood job!!!!!!!!!!!

person womo
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you called this chapter a breather but WHOLLY CRAP I'm so excited now!!!! I can't wait to see what this resistance is doing/what it is/who's in it/everything about it!!!

i hope you have fun writing about it XD

i'm so jealous of wally and george (well, not really george...or wally), but wow. exciting times ahead!

friggin' awesome chapter! i enjoyed the interaction between chuck and them. and yeah, prius' are creepily quiet.
person maloanne
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Voww! They meet Vestular. I was not expecting it, it is a good surprise.
And for the Anecdote : I fell on your update just when I about to go to bed. Needless to say I went to sleep later that intended, but it such a good reason for lack of sleep, no regret at all. :)
Bye
M
person ReighChama
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can i just saw HOLY???

and FINALLY

I still like jefferey... this story is going places, so I am very excited. I hope Mpreg doesnt show up [ can't remeber the warnings.. will check later]...
person Rosei
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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Dang!!! What a harrowing escape~!!!!! You're great at harrowing escapes!!!! HA!!

Thanks~!!
R
person L.S.
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw, we didn't see any Jeffy : ( BUT that's okay because we freakin met the Resistance!! hellz to the yeah!! ahhah :D love it!! thank you for the update!! i feel i can begin this week now. lol
person Perona
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another lovely chapter! I'm so excited he found the resistance, and terribly curious to see where it takes him and wally. I'm hoping Chuck is gonna open up more vampire gossip later. Can't wait for more!!!
person azalea
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Tea-for-Two, ahahaha, frigin' hilarious. And yeah, woo, speedy chapter. I think I'd prefer to speed through the traveling bits, though, might get bogged down in details, otherwise. And loved the ending; Was spot-on-did-NOT-see-that-coming.
person Avernion
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. <3