rate_review Reviews

Awesome chapter! I actually was surprised at Wally's turn around, but we'll see how long that lasts lol. Keep up the great work!

This is one of the best stories i have ever read ! Please do continue ! i can't wait for the next chapter Ilove to see whats happens next. thank you so much.

Well shit. Poor George. I must say I didn't expect that at all. So much for the Resistance, eh? Wally's starting to get on my nerves a bit. Still like the guy, but he's obviously very much a follower who likes it a bit too much when someone else takes the reins. Waiting to see how it all turns out.

I love this story so much! I am actually really surprised at how much I like this. I generally stay away from anything written online about vampires, for example I had seen this being recommended to be read by an author I liked, but stayed away when I saw it had vampires in it. Then I saw it being recommended again and I thought why not just see what it is and I am very happy I did. This story is engaging and original and I really can’t wait to read more of it.
This last chapter was very interesting, with learning more about how the resistance truly operates and seeing George’s hopes and expectations being squashed.
This is a great story and you are a very good writer.

Awww...poor George. There's just no hope for him is there? He's probably going to end up with Jeffery is he? After all, Jeffery has been chasing him across the country trying to find him the hardest. I kinda feel sorry for him since he really wasn't -that- bad. Also, I love Wally. Please update soon!

The plot development is probably one of the things I like the most about this story (apart from Geo and Walley's relationship). Nicely paced, quick and action filled when it needs to be, so it's perfect. I wish I'd see more of Jeffrey, though, but I'm sure you'll get us there in time.

And damn, Geo is pretty much a prude compared to Walley, who appears to be so innocent and naive at first glance O_o

-K.

Omg portland!!!!! (is a portlander)

waaaahhh I hope he will choose Jeffrey... though I must say I cant see George giving up after all he has been through. well one can only hope... ^^
please update soon!!

I'm always so happy to see another update to this! I do hope George gets what he wants by the end of this story. You have a real knack for creating protagonists that readers care about. Also, thanks for the response to my previous review, I will definitly check out FMA when I get a chance.

Wonderful! Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more!