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ughhhhhh i just wrote a review and it disappeared! adfkjadfha weh;aoif arghahg. i'll be back to review at another time when i'm not pissed off at this white box.

just wanted to leave a note about how awesome the recent chapter was! brb in a manner with a proper review!

Jeffery is nothing if not stubborn isn't he? Lol, if he were a tougher looking chracter I would love in as a pairing...

Amazing chapter, as usual. Close call for Geo, wow Gregory is persistent. Haha still love Jeffrey though, kinda pulling for him if Geo has to end up with a vampire. Jeffrey seems to be full of plans, does his new one involve Chuck? Anyway, brilliant story, I always love seeing the updates.

Awww, I had started to miss our lovely fanged vampies. <3 And then my two favourites shows upp. Woopie! Lol, I can almost see Jeffy, jumping from rooftop to rooftop in a hurried speed, keeping up with his, what was it he called him? Oh yes, "Love".

And Geffs angry banter towards Jeffy was so funny xD

Snort. My review got decapitated or something, only leaving the first word. What I wanted to say is that it was nice to see the both of them again. Greg and Jeffy are my favourites :3 And, was if Jeffy who send the chavaliery? I mean, if the smokers couldn't see nor hear Greg because he 'cloaked them' how could our guys hit him with a car? Me, I'm thinking Jeffy's sticky fingers have unstickied something for them. Huh huh huh???

As soon as Geo left the room all that was going through my head was, Oh no. Oh nonononononononononono!!!

I knew it.

And I continue to admire you for your writing - the suspense just keeps building! And I love how Jeffery always shows up, and you don't know whether to groan or cheer. And... poor Chuck! I know I should be feeling sorry for Geo... but I really feel for Chuck!

(Posting reader thanks at ElJay is a great idea, I think I might start doing that...)

wow! I really like this chapter. two vampire fighting for George. gee I feel excited for next action.
Thanks for fast update.

I have a feeling that George is going to end up with Jeffery. I don't think that Jeffery's given up just yet. He doesn't seem the type.

By the way, my captcha is "Reaping Sealskin" -> it sounds like a Native American name for some reason.

Wordy chapters are needed, I think. Constant action tires me out, so wordy, slow paced chapters are a nice
break. Besides, they give you time to explain important things :)

George, honey, good to see you ease up on the idiocy. There is a limit to how far a human companion will
follow you, after all. Wally might be loyal to the marrow, but even he could grow tired of wagging his tail like a dog and following
George's every whim.

I quite like Chuck, but I can't help but be a little distrustful of him. That might be because George is unhappy with him
right now. And if someone snitched, who? I'm twisting my little brain trying to find out. Also, I wonder what role Chauncy is
meant to play. His name has been in the story all along, but will we get to meet him in person? Why is he so elusive and unsocial?

-K.

ps: Looking forward to seeing them in trouble (again) :)

LMFAO... I'm in Clack.
xD xD

O.o I was embarrasingly intrigued when I read through how a vampire in this story is made. I love it!

I wonder who they're going to pick... a eugenist I hope!(for some reason that sounds interesting to me!)
Part of me really wants Jeffery to get a hold of george again though!