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OMG you left it on that ? you are a great writer and to leave it on a cliff hanger like that wow, please as soon as possible continue i really want to see where this leads.

Chapter 28/27

Dang!!!!! I knew there was something fishy about Chuck!!!!!

It all finally coalesced!!! Really great writing!!!!! SUPER!!!!

I had to go back and read again from when they first met Chuck and all the details
are right there under my nose!!! LOVE IT!!!!! Chuck must be a shortened version of... HA!!!!

Thanks!!!! Terrific, just terrific!!!!!!

Thank you!!!
R

OMG!!! Major curve ball you just threw us. No wonder he can take on other vampires. Gah Geo just can't catch a break. I'm now insanely curious to see what happens. Brilliant chapter.

wow! didn't see that coming.
very mysterious and I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow. That last chapter was amazing. At the end I was like "Dude" and not the good "Dude" either. It was like the "Holy-crap-I-never-saw-that-coming-holy-crap-on-a-stick-get-the-hell-outta-there Dude"! That was awesome and totally unexpected. But now I really, really, really want to know what happens next. Like really, really, really bad. That was an excellent cliffhanger. Excellent.

When Chuck felt so awful during the day I though "what if he's a vampire too?" Then I chuckled to myself. Yeah right that he was. Suuure. Ho ho ho. ... And then he was. I think my mouth is still hanging open. That's just so great. Now I'm even more curious than before. And it does explain a couple of the questions I had about the last chapter. Some things makes more sense now. Others are just so screwed. He is one strange vampy ^^

Ghaaa! That is a wicked cliffhanger!
Bye
M

Oh wow, I *seriously* didn't see *that* coming! o.0 Chuck is a vampire, huh? I wonder if some vampire turned him as a cruel joke of sort, for I can imagine that turning a known vampire hater/hunter into a vampire would be very amusing in a twisted kind of way. Or maybe that isn't Chuck at all... maybe he's a vampire desperate to get the white into his own territory so he can claim him as his own? Hmmm, that's a thought... Oh, or maybe Chuck is really Chauncey, coming to retrieve his wayward lamb after he received that email from George?! Now, wouldn't that be amusing? ;D

Can't wait for your next update! :D

i cursed reading the end! that was big! oh man. all this time, a vamp! no way.

Well I have to admit I never saw that coming- Chuck a vampire- can we say crap. Is he like an enforcer or something for vampkind to police them ? I wonder if Chuck will end up as his harem. I suppose I should have seen it with Chuck smiling at the smell of his shirt.