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January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I was not expecting that. Lovely to be blindsided once in a while. Good job!
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
VM,
Happy New Year!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for your fiction!!!!!!
R
Happy New Year!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for your fiction!!!!!!
R
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to read and review…
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HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!
That's fucking awesome! Caught me completely by surprise! Kinda explains why the hot day made him so irritable… but now I have so many other questions! - The biggest one: Why is Chuck against vampires, seeing as he's one himself? A grudge?
And what is Geo going to do now? I guess he doesn’t really have a choice; he and Wally are stuck with Chuck until they decide on / and go to their new protectorate. - They couldn't by chance stay with Chuck, could they?
I like Chuck. I like that he totally hid from them that he's a vampire, and I totally have no idea why!
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HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!
That's fucking awesome! Caught me completely by surprise! Kinda explains why the hot day made him so irritable… but now I have so many other questions! - The biggest one: Why is Chuck against vampires, seeing as he's one himself? A grudge?
And what is Geo going to do now? I guess he doesn’t really have a choice; he and Wally are stuck with Chuck until they decide on / and go to their new protectorate. - They couldn't by chance stay with Chuck, could they?
I like Chuck. I like that he totally hid from them that he's a vampire, and I totally have no idea why!
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK.
That's the only thing that wants to come out of my mouth. I'm seriously that slack-jawed. It takes a bit to stun me, but damn you, you did it. You hid Chuck's vampirism so cleverly, none of us noticed!! What the hell is going to happen now? What are his motives...? Pardon my ranting, but FUCK. I'm nervous about reading what comes next.
Damn you.
No wonder Ruth had known Chuck for ages. Who knows how old he really is? Must be why he frowned when she talked about it. Ahh, so many tiny details finally seem to make sense. The cliffhanger earns you some major brownie points, in my opinion.
Don't let us stew in our anxiety too long. Please.
That's the only thing that wants to come out of my mouth. I'm seriously that slack-jawed. It takes a bit to stun me, but damn you, you did it. You hid Chuck's vampirism so cleverly, none of us noticed!! What the hell is going to happen now? What are his motives...? Pardon my ranting, but FUCK. I'm nervous about reading what comes next.
Damn you.
No wonder Ruth had known Chuck for ages. Who knows how old he really is? Must be why he frowned when she talked about it. Ahh, so many tiny details finally seem to make sense. The cliffhanger earns you some major brownie points, in my opinion.
Don't let us stew in our anxiety too long. Please.
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I sooo did not see that coming! Not in a million years! wow... totally makes more sense. You should sooo update soon! Soon Soon Soon!
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I'm been saving to read chap27 until last night when i finish all of my exams. I'm glad I did with that amazing twist!!!
I would never have guessed that Chuck was a vampire! Maybe because George held so much hope and belief in him i wanted to as well!! I reread the chapter and was shocked HOW MANY clues you left behind and yet i didn't catch on to any of them! I'm definitely going reread all the chapters with Chuck in them so i can kick myself for not noticing the clues sooner.
Chuck is so mysterious! Does he want to help George & Wally, or is there some darker and deeper fan. Sadly, i still want to believe in Chuck! Otherwise why would he be so helpful? and letting George and Wally pick their patron? I get this feeling that Chuck became a vampire unwillingly from his unhappy facial expressions with Ruth. I would love to hear his backstory.
ahhhhhh!! The wait for the next chapter is going to be brutal!
I would never have guessed that Chuck was a vampire! Maybe because George held so much hope and belief in him i wanted to as well!! I reread the chapter and was shocked HOW MANY clues you left behind and yet i didn't catch on to any of them! I'm definitely going reread all the chapters with Chuck in them so i can kick myself for not noticing the clues sooner.
Chuck is so mysterious! Does he want to help George & Wally, or is there some darker and deeper fan. Sadly, i still want to believe in Chuck! Otherwise why would he be so helpful? and letting George and Wally pick their patron? I get this feeling that Chuck became a vampire unwillingly from his unhappy facial expressions with Ruth. I would love to hear his backstory.
ahhhhhh!! The wait for the next chapter is going to be brutal!
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the typos :P
*plan not "fan"
*plan not "fan"
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMFG OMOGMOMFOGMOGM *explodes*
WTF. I started suspected when you mentioned Chuck flirting with the old woman, and then it became even stronger with the aversion to light in the car, but DAMN wow I was still blown away!!! Chuck wearing an illusion.....holy crap. That was so unexpected! Reading Geo's revelation was like reaching some sort of pinnacle that you reach in books sometimes, that was awesome!
I'm just blown away at this chapter. Holy crap. Will George remember in the morning, though? What'll happen next! My mind is flying right now. What if Chuck is Chauncey? LOL chauncey, that name is so funny...that's like my most favorite funny character name now.
anyway, i thought that your descriptions were again, amazing. from the tortorous descriptions of what it feels like driving in a hot death metal box, to the places G and W sleep...
Since Chuck is a vampire, i wonder what this means about his whole motive to keep other vampires in place. Is he like the ultimate human sympatsizer, or is there something else he's after if not to give himself a reason to be a sort of puppet master working behind the vampires?
i just want to say again that this story blows my mind each time i read a new chapter....not to put pressure on you or anything, but i'm just amazed. the complexity and thoroughness of your plot/story details is just so effin wonderful. i looooveee youu.
can't wait to see what happens next!
WTF. I started suspected when you mentioned Chuck flirting with the old woman, and then it became even stronger with the aversion to light in the car, but DAMN wow I was still blown away!!! Chuck wearing an illusion.....holy crap. That was so unexpected! Reading Geo's revelation was like reaching some sort of pinnacle that you reach in books sometimes, that was awesome!
I'm just blown away at this chapter. Holy crap. Will George remember in the morning, though? What'll happen next! My mind is flying right now. What if Chuck is Chauncey? LOL chauncey, that name is so funny...that's like my most favorite funny character name now.
anyway, i thought that your descriptions were again, amazing. from the tortorous descriptions of what it feels like driving in a hot death metal box, to the places G and W sleep...
Since Chuck is a vampire, i wonder what this means about his whole motive to keep other vampires in place. Is he like the ultimate human sympatsizer, or is there something else he's after if not to give himself a reason to be a sort of puppet master working behind the vampires?
i just want to say again that this story blows my mind each time i read a new chapter....not to put pressure on you or anything, but i'm just amazed. the complexity and thoroughness of your plot/story details is just so effin wonderful. i looooveee youu.
can't wait to see what happens next!
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i looked at your LJ and that picture of jeffery is really good! the coloring is really nice. i suck at coloring.
only 3-5 more chapters? wowooooo....hey you know what womo stands for? WOOOO MORE!!!! I'm gonna be sad when this story ends, but all good things must come to an end. i have no idea how you plan to wrap things up though. this story is so dynamic with plot. you can have unicorns come rushing onto the scene and with how well you write i'd probably buy into it. XD
anyway, awesome!
only 3-5 more chapters? wowooooo....hey you know what womo stands for? WOOOO MORE!!!! I'm gonna be sad when this story ends, but all good things must come to an end. i have no idea how you plan to wrap things up though. this story is so dynamic with plot. you can have unicorns come rushing onto the scene and with how well you write i'd probably buy into it. XD
anyway, awesome!
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn...I didn't see that coming. That surprised the hell out of me. Oh gosh, please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens. How much longer is the story going to be?