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person rboothe
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My My. What a wonderful read! I felt like I was reading some gorgeous trashy novel! You are a very good writer!

Next chapter, please!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lawlz haha, that's a funny start, I really liked it and I love the madame, she's going to be a lot of fun I can tell already. But was it a bit out of character for Garshan to call her a whore and spit at her feet? I dunno, it kind of seemed a bit weird considering how he was in your other story. Maybe it's because he is young and still a bit rough around the edges maybe? Anyway, I liked this. It was weird and quirky and funny and I'm going to enjoy seeing the fireworks between them hehe. I know Garshan will win out in the end but it's going to be fun watching the madam sink a few uppercuts into him on the way down and make him bleed for spitting at her and calling her a whore lol. Nice as lol.

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