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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep on reading good erotica, get a good feel for it, and it doesn't hurt to have someone look over your story so that grammar mistakes and sentence mechanics are in order.
You're on the right path though
You're on the right path though
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good quickie though it would be better if it were longer ;_; Its very well written, more please? :D