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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I think the characters you have created are very fleshed out and believable which is why I think this is entirely way too short. Not that I don't mind the smexy goodness, but there seems like there is more to be told here. But, since it's your story and muse, I can only hope that Ari and, oh crap, I forgot his name, "N" will continue on maybe in a spin off.
So thanks for the writing and the sharing. Loved it. Kudos to youse....
Kiix
So thanks for the writing and the sharing. Loved it. Kudos to youse....
Kiix
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwe!! I loooove Ari and Nighteagle soooooo freaking much!!!
But what I'm now wondering is if one of them will 'break' soon? Nighteagle sure looks like he already did! O_o Poor dude! Ari's torturing him!
Damn, after Ari's 'show' every men out there will want a piece of him! LOL It'll make Nighteagle jealous! ;; hihi
Anyways, thanks ALOT for the update! I'm in love with this story!!! Plz more again soon! n__n
But what I'm now wondering is if one of them will 'break' soon? Nighteagle sure looks like he already did! O_o Poor dude! Ari's torturing him!
Damn, after Ari's 'show' every men out there will want a piece of him! LOL It'll make Nighteagle jealous! ;; hihi
Anyways, thanks ALOT for the update! I'm in love with this story!!! Plz more again soon! n__n
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'hiss' that was hot, oh really hot ummm
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love not only this story, but the others as well. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. The small amount m/f actually fits and isn't overwhelming. It's an original viking x warrior tribe bdsm thing. Really original. Keep it up, love. xoxoxo
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it when they play hard to get.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like this story. It's a bit rough and there are some spelling errors, but the over all story flows well and you like the characters. That's the most important part, above and beyond good grammar skills.If you can't tell a good story who cares how technically correct the story is? Keep writing, I'd like to read more.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter. Keep up the good work!!! A++
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it so so very HOTT!!!