rate_review Reviews

This story is great. I would really, really love for you to continue it, or any of your stories actually, but this one in particular has caught my interest. I really hope you are still writing; it seems such a shame for your stories, all of which are unique and interesting, to remain unfinished.

sigh... u have not updated any of ur amazing stories in so long :( it makes me sad. Have u lost interest? Have u hit a writers block wall? Ahh what ever the case may be, I hope that my pointless and random review is well received. Ur stories are loved, ur updates longed for, and u r missed in general ;) I really hope to something for ANY of ur stories some time soon. ( I have all of them but the oneshot ficklet 4 the merman story lol) Yep Im a suck up :D lol.

WHOA! good story! Please continue..i'm curious how they relationship will develop. Or do u intend to only make this oneshot?

Ri

MORE! grin...
it's such a good story that it will be a shame if it goes only one chappie short. this story is one of the few that really inspired and urged me to make a fanart...haha, in fact, i'm doing my interpretation of Deinos right now (2/3 done) and will be doing Aetos next. I'll post it to your LJ once i'm finished with it.

Cheers
Li

ps. update plz...*grin*

Hi, this story is really good I got so hooked into it! I've actually read it several times and I hope you continue it! It has great potential to be more than a one shot^^ please up date it if you decide to make it more! ^_^

I love dark fiction like this one, especially when it's written so well, with interesting characters. I really hope you continue.

love the story!.... and i do want u to continue it but.... i want ur other stories to continue 2 lol :P i just want it all dont I? So as long as u dont stop any of ur other stories [I have them all bookmarked ;)] then yes please working on this one 2! I can c some many interesting things happening here.

Please update this soon

Indeed, this is violent, and made me feel very sorry for the prince and the young new slave like, I wanted to rescue them and all, and this is however, how I like a lot of slash fics, as many people, and that always make me wonder why (not taking the nice style of writing and the interesting characters here into account). I mean, is this because we (I?) like to feel sympathethic to people, or are that kind of stories revealing some perverted part of us (me?)? Certainly a mix of both. Anyway, I really enjoyed this beginning of a new story from you, and really hope to see more!

Oh yeah, the mythology thing is great!

I hope I was understandable (bad english and all)

Bye :)

Black Sharne

good story. i like how you didn't spare the other soldiers. loved the descriptions, and the writing was fantastic!