rate_review Reviews

I was a lot surprised that a never been kissed virgin put out on the first... haunt. I mean goodness gracious at seventeen he's likely to have had more than one offer before or at least consiously made a decision about whether or not to engage in such activities. Then suddenly he jumped into phantom boy's bed??? Anywho, I really like the ambiance that you created with your descriptions and i think tht agammenom is an interesting character. I guess I'm just a little confused by Balian's character progression... Keep up the writing.

You know what, I'm sending you my hospital bill!
That was nosebleedingly delicious!!!!

YOUR NUMBER ONE FANGIRL COMMENT TIME!!! XD

Jou-tan...that was just...AWESOME!!!!!

I really like how it's going, and the sex scene caused me to go see my favorite pillow XD Just kidding, of course! Though it was delicious enough to drive into doing stuff like that...*winks and smirks*

It's as good as you said it was going to be! *hearts* I hope...no cross that out, I PRAY that you can keep a hold of this story, cuz I'm already addicted!

*holds up something that looks suspiciously like alcohol* Cheers to your new story, love!
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA Ki-tan)

That was an awesome sex scene! So fucking hot! Very, very nice!

Woah woah don't get on your knees!! It makes me feel guilty!! It seems like a realy cool fic thou! ceep it up!

Now I most say I loved it it was good, really good. But I've got to agree with Saminada the sex scene came a little to early. I mean the way i thought that it was going to happen was with him going up in the attic during the day to see what was up there and then going from there like him finding some weird stuff or something. But other then the way I thought about it. It still came out great so keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Take Balian dont take Balian... Agamemnonen is he a sorcerer or a being from another planet.
so far so good.. looks hopeful for more.

Do continue. I'm interested how this story will unfold.

I like it. It really good even though its one chapter. But can't wait for the next one so keep up the good work.