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for Awakening

by Canus

person Dark_Lady
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story and I want to know what is going on...write more please...
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I becoming interested in where you going with the story please update soon.
person Qiana
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good please update soon
person Kuromei
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It's been forever since you wrote something! X3 ... At least, wrote something and posted it on this site. XP But that's neither here nor there, what matters is the fact that this fic has me highly intrigued. =3 I'd love to see some explanations (to questions like "who's Agamemnon?" and "where's he taking Balian?") and definately more smut, if at all possible. X3

I look forward to the next update. ^w^
person Kip
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Will definitely be waiting for the next instalment. Maybe you could edit the last chapter so it isn't all bold font though, since that's a bit hard on the eyes? But the story was definitely worth persevering for! Thanks. 'Purr
person uandme
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a REALLY interesting story :)
can't wait for chapter 3!
person jazz
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is pretty fun so far, I look forward to reading more =D The story is interesting and I want to see where it goes.
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A teasing and intricate. This is looking sooo good.

Thank you.
person Nargle
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far I'm likeing it. I am interesed in seeing where it goes.
person Saminada
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I liked the story! That's for sure! :D

But, for some reason I felt like the smex seen was rushed a bit?

I mean, more talking would've been ok and this was the dude's first time and all, so I just can't see why they went 'all the way' this soon! ;;

I'm sorry if this might disappoint you or anything, I know that you work hard for this story! *hugs*

Anyways, I will be reading the next chapter when it comes out! ^^ Thanks alot for the story! XD :D