rate_review Reviews

Whoa! Chapter Six was totally worth the wait!!!!

Love Mason, (especially 'cause he's an unrepentant sexy sack of man-shit!!!)
Jake is in it so deep... uh... (I guess it's in him so deep!!!! HA!!)

Thanks!!!!
R

Just re-read all the chapters and enjoyed it immensely. Looking forward to future updates ^_^

Absolutely delicious!!! :D more please ^^

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to think that Mason could feel anything!!! that's ODD!!! :P I don' think so! ;)

Wow Mason....you were making such headway with Jason...and then you give him the cold shoulder after the sex! Great work!

Mason is the devil himself. Jake is in deep trouble. I wonder what happened to cause Mason to become so heartless.

I enjoy this story much more than I honestly expected to coming into it. I think that the characters are developing nicely and that Mason's a fuckin' crazy head, but I find even that endearing in a way. Jake is, of course, easy to relate to, and I even find myself growing a softspot for Obi. The side characters in the fourth and fifth chapter here were done Very well. They easily evoked the intended emotions. I really appreciated this story and I hope to see more soon. I'm going to visit that link right now and also check your profile here for more. One a bit of a side note, by the way, I read where you said you needed an editor. By the state of the fourth and fifth chapters I assume that you found one, but if you haven't, feel free to let me know and, if you'd like, I can take a crack at it. Congratulations on a job well done and many thanks for doing it!

juhhu,
yeah a new chapter,I really like your story a lot...
Omg,Mason is really the devil in person.I don`t understand
why the innocent family members from that man have to suffer too.That`s so cruel,
because like Jake they have done nothing wrong...
And why is Mason so damn sexy,I can see Jake is already falling for him...:)
But there is also one good point about Mason,he hasn`t try to take Jake against his will...yet...
Please continue soon,Jules

excellent. Jake the poor little uke with the heart of gold. Valda is freakin' scarily awesome. I hope you update regularly. This is a very interesting story and I would like to know how far Jake will go to protect his 2 families. What is that saying, "how deep does the rabbit hole go?" I'd like to think that Jake would be able to survive it..but he's changed already.

Write More!!

Kiix

Really good take on the whole "service" concept!!!

(Glad more writers are taking the challenge and coming up
with their own stories!!!)

Having fun here! Solid start!!

Thanks!
R

More Please! I really like all the stories that you are working on right now. This story is excellent. it really captures the imagination. I don't know how Jake will manage to survive the next eight years with Mason without losing his soul. And the smex scenes are very good. I can't wait to see what happens next.