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for Debt and Ownership

by JetLevy

schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mason sucks lol.....Poor Jason, he's gonna have to do something soon, I don't know what, but something haha
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Chapter!
Bye
M
person kylee123
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Mason is such a bastard - he does not fight fair at all. My heart aches for Jake - Mason is always torturing his emotions. First he starts seducing him and then he gets that blonde bitch. I wish i could reach into the computer and slap Mason.
person kaylez24
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! It makes my day.
Jake is becoming oddly dependant on Mason. He's come to terms with the fact that he belongs to Mason until his contract ends. He's actually sort of okay with that, but I wonder what will happen to Jake once he's allowed to leave. He's become conditioned to being a submissive. To having a master.

Oh and whose the blonde at the end?

schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've probably mentioned this... But yours are like, the only stories where I don't feel like I already know EXACTLY what's going to happen next.
You've keep reading fiction interesting for me.
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I love this story so much. As a hopeless romantic, I can't wait to see what happens between Jake and Mason. Really well written. Love it! XD
person kaylez24
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the edit. The story made sense before but it just flows better now.
Also Mason comes seems like less of an ass.
person kaylez24
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Just enough hate to make the sex scenes hot but conflicted.
Will you ever finish this. Seems a shame to leave a really good story just sitting there.
person Isorayau
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks. I really love Jake's character.
person kylee123
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. This story always leaves me thinking for hours afterwards. I loved the shower scene. Mason can be so sexy. I hope Jake will be able to make it through this war that is about to begin.