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oh he is going to be in soooo much trouble itn's not even going to be funny.

OMG! I just found this story and I'm hooked. I feel sorry for Jake and I worry for what Mason will do to him come morning. I can't wait to find out though.

Update siin please!

I was a little lost at the beginning of this chapter. I had to go and reread chapter 11, before I realized why there was a blond bimbo in Mason's bed.
I wonder what Mason's reasoning is in all this. He has been obsessively possessive since the start of their 'relationship'. Was Jake's need, his pushing at Mason, his demanding, what put Mason off? Did Jake's vulnerability, turn him off? Or did he lose interest now that Jake seems completely broken?
I hope for an update soon. Thanks.

This was such a hot and engaging chapter, we probably can't do it enough justice with our reviews!! :-) Definitely looking forward to what your devious mind can cook up in the next chapter: if Mason is going to be upset with Jake for breaking his punishment and seeking his own pleasure? if he is going to do nastier things to Jake for sharing what isn't his to share? if Mason would let Jake keep a boyfriend now that Derek's incriminating card is sitting in his pocket? (And there's also a part of me that believes Jake deserves to be punished for sleeping with Claire and not even leaving a note after.)

"Derek continued to shove into you" - suddenly felt a bit more engaged here. Probably a typo. :-)

Somehow I don't think the boss is going to take another man fucking his property too well. Ugh Jake what have you gotten yourself into? I am curious what he meant by "cutting" one of them, and hmmmm maybe he meant he was doing it to Marcus. Anyway, love this story, just the right kind of sick and twisted. Brilliant, can't wait for another update (haha I"m just greedy)

Well, call me a sick little fangirl, but I liked that. XD
And Jake needed it, needed to get out and be with strangers who don't know a thing about him and whom he doesn't have to care about one way or another. Now if only nights like that didn't have equally rough mornings...

Hi Jet Levy. This story is truly your masterpiece. Jake is the character I feel the most empathy for in all the stories that I read. I wish I could reach in and give him a squeeze. How can Mason stand to keep hurting Jake like this? It is as if he is trying to drill his way into the very most tender and protected core of Jake’s heart. What does Mason want from Jake? It is as if Mason wants to always be the number one thing on Jake’s mind regardless of how much pain – he is causing. No matter how hard Jake tries, he will never be able to achieve peace of mind because Mason will always come up with another way to rile Jake up. I think Mason is quite the diva. Of course I suspect that Jake will not be let go at all. I am sure Mason has something more devious planned to settle things between Jake and Marcus. I can’t wait to see what is next.

I LIKE THIS STORY XD i'm rely not that fond of slave like story's but i do like this one i hope they fall in love i like love storys... well can wait for a update!

Wow, I'm really into this story. I'm trying to figure Mason out. Jake is a peach. Please update soon. Kudos, Dearest

Hot! Thanks for the update. Love it. Hope you've found your writing groove again - and that we'll be getting another update soon! ;-)