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for Debt and Ownership

by JetLevy

person privers
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so im pretty sure you are a genius. this story is beyond brilliant. the violence and the relationship between everyone involved is beyond addictive. usually when people do mob stories they try to make the boss all nice and shit to the person they are fucking. no not you. and it is bloody freaking BRILLIANT. its so freakin raw and ahhh...hands down my new favorite story right now. i cant wait for the next chapter. please post soon!
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey i just love this story. will there be an update soon?
person Vicky
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You should continue this, its a great story.
person kiley
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and beg you to update soon.
person smart82
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! Please continue....Can't wait for the next one
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...just one question... are you going to finish this? it kills me reading something this good and then never getting the chance to see the outcome of all the mayhem!! I'm in love with your stories XD and i dont dare think i can command you but you gotta finish this = (
on that note...OOOOOOOOOh Jake gon be in trouuubleeee!
person Lilaa
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I hope you will update soon.
person Allys
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks* Noooooooo!!!!!!! How can you end it there?!!? I need to know what Mason does!! He's going to flip the fuck out O.O *Dies* I don't normally beg people for updates anymore, cause honestly I know it's probably hella annoying, but Please, Please! With puppy dog eyes and cherries and stuff ♥
person szaugg
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I came looking for another chapter, and when looking at reviews, didn't see the review i thought I left before. No prob, I thought, I'll leave another one. And something goes wonky, so I STILL haven't left a review, which makes me wonder if this happened the last time, too! Let's see if this works better!

Love the bottom's character, feel for him, and looking forward to seeing what happens to him. Like the clan stories, too. The lion sex was hawt. ;-)

There, phew!
person grey goose
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
amazing! I'm reading all your stories now and the long ones are amazing. I'm off to check out more...