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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oohh! love love love it!
but noo
the ending to chaapter 4 soundslike you ended the story :O
nooo
more!
i neeeed to find out what happens next :(
but noo
the ending to chaapter 4 soundslike you ended the story :O
nooo
more!
i neeeed to find out what happens next :(
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Juhhu,
I just want to tell you,that I like your story a lot,especially Jake...
But I`m not sure about Mason,he seems so cold and cruel,I don`t like the way he treats Jake!
Can`t wait to read more about these two.Will Jake make an attempt to escape?
Hope you update soon, Jules
I just want to tell you,that I like your story a lot,especially Jake...
But I`m not sure about Mason,he seems so cold and cruel,I don`t like the way he treats Jake!
Can`t wait to read more about these two.Will Jake make an attempt to escape?
Hope you update soon, Jules
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
emmm you know, it is indeed a wonderfull storry, but you DEFFENTELY need tu update MUCH more frequently you know...... 2 a year is not enough!
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Long wait but worth it. this story gets better and better with each new chapter. Mason is a prick can't h see how wonderful Jake is why must he try to brake the poor uke? Poor poor jake. i want to wrap him n a warm blanket and keep him safe till Mason gets his head on straight.(but the evil side of me is loving every agonizing minute of this.)
thanks for the new chapter.
thanks for the new chapter.
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...WOW WOW!!!! *speechless* What an awesome story this is!!! X___X *dies*
I can't believe that Jake just left!!?! What will Mason do now?? Is he gonna be furious and go after him? or will he give him some 'time off'? Tho I know that the second option isn't something he would normally do...*sights*
I'm dying to know what will happen next! I know I'm being pretty dramatic and all..but what can I tell you?! n___n lol
Thanks alot for yet another -mind blowing- story! *hugs x3* :D
I can't believe that Jake just left!!?! What will Mason do now?? Is he gonna be furious and go after him? or will he give him some 'time off'? Tho I know that the second option isn't something he would normally do...*sights*
I'm dying to know what will happen next! I know I'm being pretty dramatic and all..but what can I tell you?! n___n lol
Thanks alot for yet another -mind blowing- story! *hugs x3* :D
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH COME ON!!! You can't leave me hanging like that. Please, please, please update soon!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I wonder what the other gaurds are thinking? So far it's not to bad for the guy I mean he could have been sold into prostitution like most end up being in stories like this. I like that you didn't do that though. It was also sort of surprising he saved the guy when he could have let him be killed. I'm looking foward to the next update.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really really love this story so far!
please write more soon :)
please write more soon :)
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOAH. Just woah. I mean, it's meaningful and very hot XB I love it very much. I don't have time to write a more sincere review, sorry. Especially for just getting through 3 chapters, extremely sorry. Though thanks for writing, I'm glad for beta's. They make great stories even greater ;D