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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was great, will there be more?
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January 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just WOW! This story is INTENSE!---Mason is effing scary, and I cringe at everything Jake has to go through, yet I can't help but admire at how resilient he is. I read all the chapters in one go and was kept on the edge of my seat the entire time!
I see that this story hasn't been updated in a long time, so I was wondering if you could let us know what your plans are?---even if you are dropping it, because then I can stop hoping for more and appreciate it just as it is now.
However, I sincerely do hope you continue it! Words can't express how great this story is!
I see that this story hasn't been updated in a long time, so I was wondering if you could let us know what your plans are?---even if you are dropping it, because then I can stop hoping for more and appreciate it just as it is now.
However, I sincerely do hope you continue it! Words can't express how great this story is!
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July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
even though it seems that you have stopped working on your stories I just wanted to say that I absolutely love them!!!!! Your style of writing is just awesome!!! And I believe that me and a lot of other readers would be really thrilled if you'd continue writing.
All the best,
etrenoir
even though it seems that you have stopped working on your stories I just wanted to say that I absolutely love them!!!!! Your style of writing is just awesome!!! And I believe that me and a lot of other readers would be really thrilled if you'd continue writing.
All the best,
etrenoir
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Thank you for sharing it.
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Also please update soon :)
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June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Please update soon. I want to know what happens to Jake. :)
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April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this Debt and ownership story - so much potential with characters and plot. You've got a gang war starting, a budding relationship, a possessive mafia boss, the stranger back alley encounter with Derrick/Derek... I keep rereading this for more nuggets I might be missing... hope you're doing ok, haven't seen any updates for
you in over a year now. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you!
you in over a year now. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you!
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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please i need to know whats happening!!!
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June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you'll continue with this story.