rate_review Reviews

I'm likin' it so far...I'm curious to see where this goes, Keep up the good work. Update soon.
CJ

You're missing punctuation in many places and have some words switched. (Ex, weld rather than welled.) However, the story seems engaging and promising. Having a beta reader is a great help. As a writer, I know I am so sick of my own work I'm blind. ;)

KD

Cool, def much better then your usual highschool fic. Did you ever by any chance see Remember the Titans? Cause they have a sunshine, and it reminds me a bit of him. Don't know if that was intentional or not. well I like you writing style, you might want to spell check though a bit not htat its anything bad or anything.

XX Aduial

Uke Jock and Seme Goth...I like it way you mix it up a bit:)

There's a uniqueness to your writing I absolutely love~ I can't recall reading something THIS hot recently :3 heehee~ Sunshine. What a cute name! Reminds me of that football movie. Anyway, back to my review. A lovely start and a great pair XB I really expected some kind of kinky goth bottom, reading the summary. Turns out I was very VERY pleasantly surprised *A*

Thanks for writing~

Awesome story. I can't wait to keep reading.