rate_review Reviews

Beautiful chapter. I see that the pair has gotten on the wrong side of Jinnar. It is kind of hard to call a guy a homo when he has a girl getting too friendly on his lap. At least it forced Ringo to admit his feelings to Kayden. I am eager to see what happens next.

I am just starting to read this story. What a delightful story. Chapter 3 was super excellent and the kiss at the end was mindblowingly good. Very well done and I think the situation and the characters are very realistic. I am worried about the future to come as I know the two will separate at some point. I am off to read more.

Hello, againg.
There is some fearsome student protesting in my country and I'm one of them so
I'm really trying to be as rebellious as I can. LoL
Anyway, I liked this chapter and am dying to know what is this truning point you're hinting at.
I still can't wait for this story to get into 'present' time.

Writ emro esoon.

I am finally caught up to chapter 9 and I love this story so much. The characters are beautiful and all the images and descriptions are so haunting and detailed. I am afraid to get my heart broken. I love boys love stories because there is nothing as beautiful as the first person and the first time that you loved someone. Please let there be smex for them soon. It is already breaking my heart to know that they are not going to be together forever. I know that I should stop worrying about the future and focus on the present. Looking forward to your next update.

There's....it's...neh!...where's the rest? *Pout* This is all very stress indusing!

Lol. I like it. It's very well written. Very well written. I'm very impressed and I'm anxious to read more.

ya! I seriously only check this site every week or so for your updates...and oh how I enjoy them!

What can I say...Ringo and Kayden are too damn cute, but not in that overly cheesy kind of way. Your descriptions of the night were beautiful, and your writing as flowing as ever...

so, good work, and I shall be waiting patiently for the next update! :)

ah, so as an avid reader of the jigsaw, I usually just made time for that and unfortunately, neglected this story! Sorry! Well, in order to make up for lost time I read the whole thing in one go. Really, it was hard to walk away once I started, despite my 56 pages of required reading for tomorrow...

So that being said, me likes! It was a nice break from the jigsaw, as the plot isn't quite so complicated, and the angst level is taken down a level. I do enjoy the fact that these two actually become friends first, that's always a good step :D And yay for some action! As I came near to the end of the chapters I was scared you would leave me hanging without any :)

But now as everything seems to be going well, I am reminded of that first chapter and it makes me think things don't bode well for these two...which makes me sad. I am eager to see how things commence. Sooo...commence please! Now I can look forward to either stories' updates! Hurray!

ten fragment o rozmowie opuszkami palców, o dotykaniu się dłoni i rozmowie oczu, niesamowity. dech zapiera od wizualizacji z wyobraxni. pozdrawiam lee

Still very much enjoying! Broken hearted knowing that something seems to have gone very wrong between them. Hoping all ends well in the present day.

well if i wasn't dazzled then i sure am now.
"i've gotta pee"- lol.
i never saw that coming.
anyway, this story is turning heads everywhere it goes.
i never read any story in which the couple stop for body needs that aren't of carnal nature.
a piece of reality and human need pyramid-1.water 2.food 3.toilet and stuff and then smexxx.
it's funny how ppl who write stories forget that little details like this build the story by
making the chara
more human as it should be cause they're supposed to be human.
this reminded me on "forrest gump" didn't he run for the president by using"i've got to pee"
as an election slogan?

anyway can't wait for next chapter?
i'm so ready for you to take me to the 'uncharted waters':))