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schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was...amazing but....I just about cried at the end because it didn't continue. Its actually kind of funny I have been driving my friend nuts waiting for this post. She was like going to eat my soul because I kept getting so distracted from our rp. ^_^ Really good post though. Now for the next one. *Sits fidgeting waiting for next chapters*
person Melisa
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh guys hurry back i want to read the next chapter so bad!! this is great stuff
person Lindsay
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I've been reading your story on your website and am guilty of not reviewing. I just noticed Afterimage was on AFF and I find it much easier to review and had to do so immediately. I love your story and I think In the Company of Shadows is the best story I've ever read on the internet and I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. You definately deserve more reviews because your story rocks!
What I like most about Ch 1 is that it focuses on Ann and I've always been curious to know more about her and Lydia. It was very interesting how Sin was at Willowbrook; and my favourite part was when Ann realizes it was Sin who'd been visiting her sister. You're both very talented writers and I hope you publish this series someday! Keep up the good work, cant wait to read more! much love.
person sugar
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love how cleverly this is written. You two have a unique talent; I'm looking forward to seeing updates.
person Twitch
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, I love this story and these characters so much. Every time a new chapter is posted I get super giddy, and I read it twice. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person fdgfd
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Must be great being such a paragon. Too bad it doesn't come with balls."

god i laughed so hard
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kind of just want to pounce on Sin. He's like so special and huggable. Its interesting how you put in the part about them being bad for one another because sadly enough they are in some ways. They are both kind of...off socially so they don't know what to do and will fall into broody silence. I'll be interested to find out what you do with the rest of this. Sin completely spazing out and Boyd's mother being against their relationship as is the general in some ways gives you lots of room to create some angst for the two. You have to post though because my imagination is already going wild and it's only been two weeks since the last time that you put up a new chapter. *Sad face* I'm going nuts waiting for a new chapter. I saw that it could be a month or two...oh my...I may not make it as a sane person.
person sgf
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
anytime i read this i get a placebo song stuck in my head. i'm pretty sure that's a good thing!

this is great so far; i love it as much as the first book, and i'm only on the second chapter. i feel so bad for sin. your characters are so believable and relatable even though they're so far from anything i've ever experienced. i think it's amazing when authors have the ability to make the reader truly experience something they never could have even imagined happening before.

you guys are great!!
person Sarah Lehman
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your work since you posted chapter 16 (I think) of In the Company of Shadows. I decided I should finally let you know that I love Sin and Boyd, and consequentially their story! I'm so sorry it took me this long to tell you that you guys are wonderful, my only excuse is that I'm a very shy reviewer. I did not start reading Afterimage until today, however. I think it's because I wasn't ready for a while (partly because I didn't know your second story was even around until recently) since I want Sin and Boyd to be happy, and I could pretend that they were until I started reading again... I couldn't resist though! Also, I was a bit exhausted after the end of In the Company of Shadows. I felt like everything became a bit rushed, and somewhat less engaging. You're back at the top of your game however, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please don't get discouraged by your lack of reviews! I'm sure that you have quite a few readers who (because AFF is so poorly organized...) don't know this story exists yet! Thank you so much for sharing a truly engaging and imaginative story!

P.S. I LOVE how long your chapters are...
person oo
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey sonny and ais. just joined your web, forum thingy!
ive missed so many wonderful chapters! 2! im recovering from a bit of flu! ew.
you guys are so great!
you answered all of my questions, and the questions i was wondering about from other reviewers!
and your not "yellers". awww. nice authors. such enthusiastic authors too!
and, i loved reading about sins memory as a child when he first met lydia. and the lydia incident too. SO, OF COURSE ID LOVE TO READ A LIL SIN MINNI SERIES! thatd be so cute, im imagining a lil chibi sin for some reason.;)... er now that i think about it, itd probably be really messed up to read about a lil sin. right? cause of his mum and pops and what happened to him.... so, thatd be devastatingly sad to read happening to a child. er. its up to you guys! but i suspect there will be more flashbacks as child sin in this story. since hes all being haunted by the past and everything. its so spooky good!

HOLLY MOLLY. I THOUGHT I HAD REALLY SCORED WHEN I SAW THAT BOYD MODEL! BUT YOU GUYS HAD ALREADY HAD HIM! YOU HAD HIM ALL FIGURED OUT! BOY OH BOY! you sort of burst my bubble. but you totally got my bubble back when i saw the sin. but damn did you guys find some great pictures that i didnt even see on body fan sites! oh, and all your amusing lil comments! heeeeeeeeee, yes exactly! do more of that! i loved that.
im just screeching like a banshee when i saw the pics, then that one when hes in the tub.aw.sad. hes so beautiful. your comment on how it reminded you of when lou died. AW! alot of the pics remind me of the story. thats so uber great right!... i watched that vid ballad of boyd on youtube, man theres alot of boyd vids! and oh, did you see his tooshy? lol. HES FROM KENTUCKY!!
***** ***** that boyd model totally gets a 10 out of a 10.

OMG!OMG! ITS SIN IT SSINT SINT ISTNISIN ...................................... brain dead.
IIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNN! its sin.
I cant believe you found a sin! my heart! im having a dilemna here. I have to keep clicking away from him every time I see him cause its sin, its just to good to be true. Im so silly, its like a naughty part in a movie you know your not supposed to watch and you have to keep looking away just cause. I keep looking away from him. Its like my head is gonna spin off or something. OH, and his eyes. WO'OW. and, yes, i watched the video! hes so bloody hot.
***** ***** he gets a 10/10 too!

anyways, you guys are great.
AND LINKING PARK FANS! ME TOO! WTF! YOU GUYS ARE GREAT!
well, im on my way to catch up on the chapters i missed.
keep up the awesome work.
-ardent follower, devotee, admirer, and fan!
er, im way past fanatic for the 'in the company of shadows' series!