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Quite extreme sceneries you created there, honestly I feel exhausted just reading the latest chapters.. Took me a while but loved every minute of it. I always get this giddy feeling when reading my favorite fiction characters described being near my home, aww. There is nothing worse than freezing climate, poor Boyd. I was so certain something would happen in that bed between Boyd and Kassian, but I guess it would have been kinda cheap so I was glad nothing happened. Speaking of Kassian.. does our hero agent have a slight alcohol problem? Maybe he's drinking to fill some kind of void inside of him, hmm.. And I think Harriet needs some loving too, I wanted to hug her when she came to rescue Boyd. And Cade.. you know, as a female I can't believe I'm saying this about the misogynistic douchebag, but.. I am curious what kind of environment or upbringing produces an imbecile like him, well at least for him to create a front like that, as I guess there's more to him than what we're seeing so far. Or maybe it's just wishful thinking, but Boyd seems to think so.. His attitude just reminded me again how much similarities there are between homophobia and misogyny.

Anyway, I actually think you made a right decision starting to post the sequel in more than one chapters at a time, as it seems to flow better that way. I guess we'll be seeing some Sin/Boyd interaction next time? I have no idea what's going to happen, I'm somehow lost with those two at the moment.. Is Boyd going to be hurt knowing Sin did in fact have sex with Ann, or is he more worried about possible feelings involved? It's been so long since they talked so I'm really looking forward to that.

So thanks for the update, brilliant as usual. Until next time.

yeah! a updated! yeah !!!!!! this has made my night supreme! if that makes sense? i just finished all my gross homework and went to do something to help me relax and enjoy the rest of the night and i see this has been updated and it just lifts my mood! Now, I am really excited for the next chapter where hopefully sin and boyd meet? ^^ you know since the next update will be around valentines day (i assume) and maybe some nice fluffy moments between them ...or not ^^ whatever you guys write. hasn't let me or anyone down yet because your story is great and you guys rock! i love you! I hope you two continue to write more great stories even when this story has been completed! i would buy this if it ever got published and then buy more and give them as gifts! because more people need to read this story!!! its sooo good!

I love reading about Boyd's training!

Yes! Updates! I think out of the three chapters posted, I liked chapter 15 the most. I was happy to get to know Harriet a bit more, and the action in the forest was exhilarating. I'm looking forward to see what happens when Boyd finally gets to see Sin. He's my favorite character, and I'm worried about him.

In short, it was amazing as always, guys. This is me anxiously awaiting the next updates. :)

Oh my god!!! How you guys can write such a wonderful story is beyond me. You are such skilled writers - I pray you never stop writing! Love this story! Can't wait untill the next update :)

Lady Oak

Well, I've become absolutely mesmerized by this story again. I wanted to calmly see where it was going at first.. and now you've set up all the hooks.

I am so interested in the dynamics between Sin and Ann, for me it's actually the most intriguing aspect of the sequel so far. I'm not thrilled by them having sex together, but only because I always see people relying on sex to forget their loneliness rather unhealthy.. What I mean is that in such an arrangement unsaid feelings might develop anyway, and in this case I fear it's Ann who is going to suffer from some sort of heartache later, maybe even now. I hope she can keep it in line though, and I'm surprised that I actually feel worse for her than Boyd at the moment. Her private life is so utterly sad even compared to Sin and Boyd (incredibly).. She's all alone. Boyd most likely hasn't got much to worried about at the end of the day. But who knows, you might surprise me.

I wasn't irritated with Boyd at all (as I suspect some readers might have been) when he refused to talk to Sin during his training. It's life and those two have too many issues untouched to understand each other well enough. I find Boyd's reflections of Sin's needs first and foremost surrounding their relationship quite sobering, and I'm not quite sure where I stand with that. Their relationship is so full of secrets, mistakes, misunderstandings, conflicting goals and needs etc right now..

Ooh, I'm wondering if Kassian is going to have a bigger role in the story in some way, don't know.. just suspicious about that. And I am glad we finally found out what happened to Emilio. It was easy to guess who killed him but how it actually happened wasn't. I'm not sure if I've understood Emilio's character the way you present him. I never had much respect for how he willingly mindfucked his son, and to be honest I suspected Sin just butchered him because he finally lost it. So, I now understand there's a lot more to Emilio, what he meant to Sin, as odd as that is..

Anyway, I think I read in your site there's going to be another book after this one? That's such a relief because I might become teary eyed the day this whole journey is over. Actually, I'm certain of it.

(And I apologise for my english, it seems it's getting worse each day)

love the updates. you guys could publish.

-.- so much het. Since I tend to skip over such things, give me yaoi! Give me angst! and give me a happy ending! Revive sin's dad or do a long lost relative or something. That's where I think you're going with this eventually. That Mexican dude was too suspicious.

^.^ I forgot to say this story is amazing. I was a rabid lover of the first part but the prologue is kind of off putting with this story because of the copious het and flashbacks. I kept on going back to the story after attempting and failing to get through the prologue, and this time I decided to just skip the prologue, go on to the good stuff! I was not disappointed at all and I'm WAITING. SITTING and WAITING for the next chapter.

Still no clue what happened in the prologue, but that's fine. I can just assume.

I loved it!!!! Don't make this end bad though D: please?