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person IT HURTS
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i cant read this anymore... T___T i get this pain in my chest over Sin and Boyd.. so i will wait till a few more chappies are released b4 i start again. dont get me wrong, i love you guys to death! but...seeing the two of them apart is killing me.

BLASTED WINTERS!!! TT___TT

xoxoxoxox
person TeaGirl
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...THEY NEED MAKE UP SEX!!!!!!!!!!!! STAT!!!!!!

...on a more serious note (tho make up sex IS a very serious matter), i have so many mixed emotions...

just finished ch19...argh poo... damn it Boyd..WHY???!? T___T

love you guys for the update.. my brain is all mush and depressed...so i will end my mindless review.
person alyssa
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im getting frustrated. i just want these two to kiss and make up
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so i thought i'd wait a few updates before i read anything else to get past this bump of misery you guys have decided to put everyone in. but i should have know i couldn't not read this story. i'm addicted i suppose. congrats to you. of course now i see the bump is actually becoming a major fucking deal and i wanted to cry when sin and boyd broke it off. i feel so so bad for both of them and i know i'll worry over what will happen next until you update again. i wonder how pissed sin will be when he finds out about thierry, i know the reaction can't be good. though, hopefully he'll feel hurt and realize he caused the same to happen with boyd. i'm also hoping ann dies in a fire, but i know we don't always get what we want. i'm worried for boyd too with the level 10 training. if he makes one more mistake they won't really terminate him will they? scary thoughts. i really like where you are taking this even if all the bad stuff is giving me heartache for the poor boys. nad just so you know, i actually had a dream about this story the other day and that only happens with stuff i REALLY love. it's probably my highest form of compliment so there you go. happy writing and thanks for giving me such a great story to obsess about.
person spex
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG BOYD! GO BACK TO SIN! OMG SIN STOP BEING STUPID! MAKE UP AND MAKE SWEET LOVE OR SOMETHING!! ;_________; I nead more!! <33
person loa
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am utterly smitten with your story, the characters, the world, all of it. i still remember when you guys were posting the first chapters, it's been so cool to see the series evolve! it's pretty astounding to me that i'm not reading this in book form at a store. are you guys trying to get published? what publisher wouldn't kill to get their hands on this? thank you again so much for making my day with another update. :D
person ta.
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, even though I was expecting more misunderstandings and hurt feelings between Boyd and Sin, I was quite surprised by how seriously Boyd finally took it. It's one big mess now and I can't believe Sin is sitting alone in his apartment, with small hope their friendship might still survive, and Boyd is actually talking about a break up. One big question mark here on how this is going to be fixed.

Sin really needs that therapy. Boyd needs some rest but I hope he'll pull through the training.

So sad we have to wait a few weeks for updates.

person Anon
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ihateherihateherihateherihateherihateherihateherihateher
the soapy adoring romantic in me wants the confrontation over sin's betrayal to be big and angry and hurtful :P
person aly
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so that arc was pretty awesome, no lie. i love kassian, like really really, and shockingly, even though she's at times a total cunt, harriet has grown on me. the character development in these last couple of chapters has reminded me of why i enjoy you guys so much. truly, the fact that you are with holding new chapters until next weekend makes me sad. :(

ah, well, i get over this posting schedule eventually. i'm just so glad the two of you are no longer on hiatus.
person nata
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I really love this story and am enjoying reading these mini arcs. You guys do a great job always! thanks for the update!