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by GreatMasterM

schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RIGHT MORE!!! PLEASE!!! BEFORE I HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU!
person Illyric
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far, and I'm completely addicted. It's like you can see into most writer's minds!

The near rape experience kinda scared me, and you still have to resolve the mysterious text messages!

But, it is amazing. If there's a way for me to like, get an alert or something as to when you update this, add me to it!
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
was it that guy who wanted to go home with him to grab those notes?
why do people insist on going about the perverted way of trying to get what they want?
why do jerks have to give hell to people who life different?
not all fanfics have masculine gays so it is refreshing to read one where they are not so flamboyant. (i think your other stories are like that huh? sorry i have not read any of them in about two months so i kinda forgot. sorry but to make that up i do have the url to BSC saved on my cell on my fav's for the browser)
don't get me wrong by these questions, i do like the story and the way it is going cause i really don't know where it is going. it intrigued me and has kept me reading so far and i hope it will continue. more so having two stories in one is crazy and can be confusing at times, but not to where you can't keep up with the story line. i really like this story and your others too.
~AubreyBlackRose
(Aubrey is a unisex name)
so about it being long winded
person Kuromei
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Those fingers must've been rough. O__o;; I mean rough. Poor Nick... And, I'm probably still seeing things here, but I'm seeing that Nick doesn't really notice Chad's reactions, or notice that those reactions are kind of... off, in a way. Kind of that "my dreams are coming true; oh wait, they aren't" way.

Meh. I'm so weird right now. XP My fangirly brain's still in overdrive. Alcohol's not helping... @w@;;

Happy New Year! XD
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope the guy doesn't come back... i love the jokes between chad and nick! :D the chapter was good, even with the writer's block. i wonder if nick is going to remember what happened to him... hmm... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! can't wait, and i'm glad you had a good christmas! :D
ASOTA
person Kuromei
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you're evil for not telling us whether Nick was raped or not (in this chapter,) but you make up for it by giving us (or me, at least) a laugh-out-loud festival. I kind of needed it today. X3 Nick can be so amusing, sometimes. One second he's cursing Chad's name to the heavens, one offer of food later he's practically in worshipping him. lol X3

Anyway, I really liked the chapter, and I look forward to the next. Good luck with those exams! ^w^
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you a boy or a girl?
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well from his reactions and his conversation and train of thought, i have to say it is unlikely he was raped. but i could be wrong...if he was raped he is dealing with it extremely well...almost too well to even think he was raped...don't know if that makes any sense or not... i hope it does...basically he seems to be doing to well to have been raped or almost raped.
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why do you tease me so?!?! why?!?! i want to find out what happens!!! you are sadistic! *sniff* and i'm not masochistic!!!
ASOTA
person Camui
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel incredibly awkward right now. My personal computer is infected with a virus (it's that time of year, KUFUFUFUFU *insert pun here*) so I'm on my mom's. Reading slash. GAY PORN. Not only that but my nephew, who is just over a year old, is right next to me. It doesn't matter that he can't read. But I have a feeling... he KNOWS. *leers*

Anyway. I'm bi-sexual and bi-polar. :D But those other things, I'm clear of... so I get like 50% of the deal eh? Does it come with free lunch?

Rape rape rape rape. Surprise buttsex. Maybe when Nick (most of the time I honestly forget that's the name of your character) got conked out, some force of gravity pulled his pants down, lubed him up, and made him fall on some sort of phallic object. Hey, it could happen. I'm sure of it. Maybe. If God really hated you.

Annnnyway thanks for the update. I dunno why I'm thanking you. Not like my life depends on it. I'll only keel over and die if you don't post soon. (kidding)

-Camui