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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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“Yes! That’s the mean man who raped my quivering bottom like the pansy that I am!”
He was shaking me again. Had I been a baby, I’d be dead now.
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While the entire thing had me giggling like a junior high school girl, I must say that these two almost killed me. I might have to see a doctor about the horrid pain in my back from crashing my desk chair to the floor; with me in it. I liked the easy flow between the "Story" and the story. Wait...that didn't really make sense...or did it?
I've confused myself here.
Anyway, I like how we read what Nick wrote, and then it just goes on to the next part of Slash Work as if the whole Guy A and Guy B thing was Chad and Nick doing stuff. It really a cool element to the whole thing that sucker punched me in the face and then taped my eyes open to make sure I didn't miss anything. This whole piece was beautiful, simply stunning. The whole "Answering reviews" thing that you did kind of bugged me though. While you did get around the horrendously long authors notes that some people do to answer their reviewers, there were a couple chapters that felt like they were only there to answer reviews.
I'm gonna go check out you profile, so you might hear from me again!
Taku
“Yes! That’s the mean man who raped my quivering bottom like the pansy that I am!”
He was shaking me again. Had I been a baby, I’d be dead now.
"
While the entire thing had me giggling like a junior high school girl, I must say that these two almost killed me. I might have to see a doctor about the horrid pain in my back from crashing my desk chair to the floor; with me in it. I liked the easy flow between the "Story" and the story. Wait...that didn't really make sense...or did it?
I've confused myself here.
Anyway, I like how we read what Nick wrote, and then it just goes on to the next part of Slash Work as if the whole Guy A and Guy B thing was Chad and Nick doing stuff. It really a cool element to the whole thing that sucker punched me in the face and then taped my eyes open to make sure I didn't miss anything. This whole piece was beautiful, simply stunning. The whole "Answering reviews" thing that you did kind of bugged me though. While you did get around the horrendously long authors notes that some people do to answer their reviewers, there were a couple chapters that felt like they were only there to answer reviews.
I'm gonna go check out you profile, so you might hear from me again!
Taku
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I read the Author's Note, and saw you had an important announcement. Being the stupidly curious person I am, I scrolled down to read it, not able to wait to read the chapter. And I see:
'It's TOTALLY Chad's evil twin brother."
At the time, I totally though I spoiled myself, hahahah.
But anyway, irrational thinking aside, I just wanna know who it is, man!
'It's TOTALLY Chad's evil twin brother."
At the time, I totally though I spoiled myself, hahahah.
But anyway, irrational thinking aside, I just wanna know who it is, man!
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the only thing i have to say is go chad! for the rest, i'm speechless...
ASOTA
ASOTA
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooo its the dude with the mole right?...well atleast it might be or it could be hot Matt since he could have followed Nick home (when Nick was getting the notes) a well I guess I can wait until the next chapter lol.....I really like your story
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter...and if in fact you are going on another hiatus, may i implore you not to leave it as this big of a cliffie...i mean at least let us know who the attacker is...pretty please with sugar sprinkled on top...i guess that's all my begging for right now...good luck with school.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang it! I had managed to put Mr. 9 out of my mind so I could function in society, now you go and put him back in! Now the daydreams are gonna come back.... -/////////- *blink* I'm sorry, what was I saying? OwO;;
*cough* Anyway, yes the argument and subsequent apologies were a litte rushed, but well done. The end of the story is near and I understand wanting to get there quickly without having to sacrifice quality. I share the sentiment, except for the "quick" part, since my stories take forever. X3
Now, one last thing; Who the hell is under the mask?!?!? DX *stays tuned*
*cough* Anyway, yes the argument and subsequent apologies were a litte rushed, but well done. The end of the story is near and I understand wanting to get there quickly without having to sacrifice quality. I share the sentiment, except for the "quick" part, since my stories take forever. X3
Now, one last thing; Who the hell is under the mask?!?!? DX *stays tuned*
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
#^@&ING CLIFFIHANGERS!!!!
Grr.
Awesome chapter, with great plot twists. I'm looking forward to the next one; you know you want to post soon =).
Grr.
Awesome chapter, with great plot twists. I'm looking forward to the next one; you know you want to post soon =).
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Tis the season of love, it seems. Could we get a more solid description of this roommate to save our sanity? I'm having flashbacks of Rent and hot guys at once, and it's quite confusing. It'd be nice to get one of them out of my head relatively soon. As of now, it's a pair of models singing and dancing in slutty santa outfits. :)
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A 9?! O_O ..... Oh, oh my... O///////O *fantasizes*
*comes back to Earth* Where was I? Oh, right. I didn't mean "rough" as in calloused, I meant "the polar opposite of gentle." As far as Chad goes, I think his behavior qualifies as bi. If anyone cares to contest this, then I guess you can say he's straight with one single, solitary exception for Nick. Either way he wants Nick's ass. X3 That's all I need to know. ^w^
... Actually, I do need to know who assaulted Nick. And the motive for such action, if possible. *puppy dog eyes*
Just so you know, I don't expect an answer. I'm just being a pain 'cuz I'm sleepy. X3
*comes back to Earth* Where was I? Oh, right. I didn't mean "rough" as in calloused, I meant "the polar opposite of gentle." As far as Chad goes, I think his behavior qualifies as bi. If anyone cares to contest this, then I guess you can say he's straight with one single, solitary exception for Nick. Either way he wants Nick's ass. X3 That's all I need to know. ^w^
... Actually, I do need to know who assaulted Nick. And the motive for such action, if possible. *puppy dog eyes*
Just so you know, I don't expect an answer. I'm just being a pain 'cuz I'm sleepy. X3
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
title: season's of love- rent...very interesting chapter. i was surprised by how cool chad is turning out to be...can't wait to see what happens between the two...and what's up with his nightmares.