rate_review Reviews

OMG!

All i could say is ... WOW...

I just read the ending and...
Dude... I totally love this story....
No words can describe how much
this story is awesome!

btw. I'm intro-ing you to another friend~

;) thou i don't know if he reviews..... XD

*thumbs up* -scoots off to the next chapter-

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NICK!!!! LIKE WHAT THE HELL?!??!?! what the heck he go do that for?!?!?!?!
*is in 'WTF?!' mood* like honestly dude~~~~ like honestly!?

*paces up and down*

pushing a guy away when he tries to kiss you, is like somewhat saying "IM STRAIGHT! DONT FREEGING KISS ME!"
but really honestly, arn't you (nick) NOT straight and actually have ever thought of kissing him (chad) ? so yea.... that should explain my 'WTF?!' mood.... =_= jeez honestly... *headplam*

...........

but well... it turned out ok yea?
but o_O what's the deal with intro-ing a damnable new hawt character who conveniently happens to be roommate of chad? lol like threesome please? XD


onwards to next chappie~!

- nekoii

... whoa?
someone double check this for me...

is Chad getting... protective? jealous? something? anything?!

and for good reason!!! which IDIOT just ups and opens their door 3 am in the morning?!?!?!
goodness nick? your digging your own grave here! its like asking to be raped!!! ah god?! *headwall*

and thank god chad stayed over! if he were'nt there, you'd be blood raped by now!

gooddness! *headdesk*

gah!
next chapter!

- nekoii

blow me away~

nick said "DUDE" like dude?! XDDD
each chapter i'm reading lately has been baffling me in more ways than one!

"Had I been a baby, I’d be dead now."
it made me thing, Chad's behaving like his 'wife' just gave birth to his baby son/daughter. smthing...
.... geehehehehhehehehehhe~~~~ XDDD

and
"Huh...I guess real life does write the script after all."
like what sage? what does that mean???
i recall you saying that your life doesnt reflect the stories you write, but huh? i huh you at that line~~~ helloooooo????
;)
but heh, dont' tell me if you don't want to yea~ its cool... Dude~
(ROFL! i just HAD to say that~ XD)

I somewhat guessed that someone Nick knew in real life was actually reading his story, maybe Simon... or possibly chad~ or mitch...? (what's the name of the lemme borrow your notes guy?)

Anyway, good going!
and hey! you CAN actually write a short-and-sweet story!

... yes... i'm still stumped by the fact that BSC is like over FOURTY chapters long~ like whoaaaaaa really man~
heck it really, its getting good!
Anthony!!!! Shawn!!!! >___<
Keith! XD keith's da man in the show really, he's a nice bit of spice that you dont wanna bite into really~ xD

*sighs* ah...

I've finnished reading this one!!!
What am I to read now????
(Guess i'll go check out that... kuromei? 's stories out~ ? )

all the best with BSC and your future plans and stories!
and all the best with your love life ;) whom ever it might be with
and why is it that i keep thinking BSC stands for black stars collide?

that's probably because...

I WANT TO READ "SHOOTING STARS COLLIDE" !!!!! XD

come on, you have it don't you, somewhere in some word.doc of yours...

just post it! ;)

before i go, i'll leave a message for 'slash work'
you began rather educatory, (was that a word?)... what with teacher nick teaching us what is being gay about, yea, that not ALL gays are flamboyant pink things in skirts... yep i know that...
like hello, ALL the gay males i know are very... well male... let's see jasper does rock climbing... edward used to be a model... uh... yea i think i only know 2 xD hahah XD ah well they're good friends...
ah yea anyway... after a good 4-5chapters of education, i guess you got it that your readers got it so the real plot began~~~ and we got chad and nick~ naisu~ from there, the plot developed rather quickly, but it still felt all right~

hehe. gah! *facepalm* I dunno why i suddenly recalled that part when chad nearly catches nick writing his story, and nick goes "I love you. " gah! XDDD sorry . i gotta say this ...
" THAT WAS SO CUTE!!!!! XDDD kyaaaa! > w <

hehehheheh ok. oops pardon the fan-girl~ hehehhehe~

till next time!
x3

- nekoii

OMG i DO NOT think its a good idea if people sent you 'hot sexy naked' pictures of themselves each time they reviewed~ XD
what if its not hot and sexy and only naked and not a very good naked.... I mean like, hello, not everyone in this world has a to-die-for body eh? XD
Speaking of bodies... I hope you'd go into more how the characters LOOk like... y'know, all the colours and height and weight and all three measurements perhaps~ ;)

and nice! Destroyer of Free Time, and the Dark Lord... sweet i like those descriptions, they fit very perfectly~

ok pause. lemme tell you somthing freaky....
at the time I was reading the line "My cell phone vibrates. I got a text message." My cell phone vibreated too, I got a text message... *screams* ITS A CONSPIRACY!!!!! .....
XDDDDDD lolz~

but seriously, can you not make me gag please? What the hell was with the babycakes and cutie-pie? even GIRLS dont always talk like that... urgh...
babycakes? like wtf?

then you go and say "two oversized, hairless balls on a woman’s chest"
O______O .... bffhh...GAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAH!!!!
omg! GAH! OMG!!! XDD
then you go thinking what is it that straight guys are thinking, being so obsessed over those 2 hairless balls of flesh eh?

lolz~ but more or less, i'd say chap 4 is better than chap 3... at least you get some smirks and fun in this one... and suspense! the project date! XDDDDDD
it's rather typical... but still nice to read about~ XD Nick's just so cute~ in an odd way, sometimes, if you were to follow a person's every aspect of life (well nearly every aspect) you'd think you find some dirty secrets or something that might disgust you (yes like that sock), but other than that, he's very talkative, and likeable~ but he seems like a "i like to be alone thank you" person~ XD

ok onwards to the next chapter! (whooots! the fun of reading an already completed fic)

- nekoii

"I placed the key in the door knob and only felt the slightest hint of pain before I blacked out."

if you were expecting a lengthy review from me when its a cliffie and i just have to click on 'next chapter' to save myself, then im sorry to dissapoint you. :P

*zooms off to the next chapter*

...
FINALLY!
dialog! as in. alot of dialog!

and then you write a fabulous little snippet of "when stars collide" (did i get the name right?)

you know, then you used
"‘Tuberculosis.’ I thought to himself." i had to double check to make sure that was an "I" and not a "1" XD

and yep. im dropping a shot review again~

*leaps to the next chapter*

ps . i freaking hate these code messages things "brundin meetings" the hell?
its hard enough having to type while lying on my front!