rate_review Reviews

I like how you write this story! It's not a typical gay story, which is a good thing. I hate it
when the main character dudes just start the story by having gay sex.

Now, what would you do if you were stuck in a prison?

I really like your man character... Just the right amount of wit and jumbled enthusiasm. He makes me laugh... a lot. This is probably one of the best ideas I've ever hard of in terms of plot. I really never would have thought to approach a BL/ yaoi story from the first perspective as the writer of slash. I found that the pacing you have works nicely and the train of thought is believable and yet random. I can definitely identify with a lot of his train of though especially about creepy teen fangirls and the over immasculation of gay men in manga/yaoi/erotrica. I have to say that when Chad's name was first mentioned it seemed a little forced. (sort of like you really needed to name him so you chose to have him refered to by name a an awkward time maybe I just feel like that because of his unname-ness in the first chapter though.) I'm looking forward to your next chapter, though I'm secretly hoping that there will be an event soon that sort of breaks us out of your main character's head for a bit. While charming and wonderful, I think that the story began to drag a bit in this chapter (chapter 2) if only because there is only so much you can do when inside one character's head and now that i have a clear sense of who he is I'm sort of wondering where he's going (besides partially insane). Thanks a lot for updating!

-jet

Ha ha, I love it, Its funny. I like stories that make me laugh, good work.
Its interesting thinking about what things in this story are fiction, and which aren't. Makes reading your story even more fun for me ^_^. I don't usually review stories (I'm slack ><') but with an extra incentive I decided I would. I'm really enjoying the slash fiction writer's POV in this story. Its the first with that kind of POV I've read, its refreshing. I will be awaiting your next chapter. I hope you can update soon.

P.S If the part in the story about not getting much sleep is true. Then... um get more sleep damn it! (lol)

I liked this chapter, but there was one thing that bothered me.

"'Azure Petals,' which pretty much said that he/she (though most likely a she) liked it."

She? I can assure you that this "Azure Petals" most certainly has a penis.

Other than that it was great, and I really liked how you incorporated the reviews into the story itself. Very interesting. I'm interested in seeing how you're going to make that work out is there is some influx of a great many reviews.

Very interesting, you've definitely caught my attention. I am excited to see where this is going. Looking forward to your next update.

wow!! i love this story. it's really original and i like that it's from a writer's POV. i'm not much of a writer but this is cool, and i can't wait for more!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
ASOTA

lmaox100000 XDD I saw what you did, young man, and I love it! XD I can't believe you mentioned me! X3 I'm so flattered. X3 *blush* I guess I do use a lot of smilies, don't I? 83 Hah! Like I care! XD I luv 'em! ^o^ *kid trapped in a woman's body*

Oopsie. I just let everybody know I'm a stalker. 83 Heh, too bad I only stalk really good stories. ;3 The authors of said stories, too, but that's beside the point. X3

Another great chapter, Sage! I look forward to the next one, whenever it comes! ^o^

i like it. up-date soon. lol lol .. i just thought it wood be fun to put that in.. i have never read a story in this way. you are doing a different take on the whole story thing. looking forward to see how this plays out.

More great work, I see. I love the position you've taken up with the story, here. It really is a nice change of pace from the riff-raff one normally finds here. Keep on writing, luff, can't wait for that next chapter.

i completely love nick's random self dialog in class and i'm really interested in how you plan on getting "the friend", chad to help with the "not gay" story. im kinda sad that its gonna be two jocks, i've read a lot of stories about jock suddenly breaking out in a make out scene in the showers. but the way you have there personalities is gonna make it you that it isnt so oblivious. anyway cant wait for more....your faithful groupie ^_^