rate_review Reviews

I have to admit... This was something that totally caught me off guard (in the good way!). I NEVER come aroun to originals and I tend to skip over each story that doesn't interest me. However, your story was something different. The grammar and spelling were a bit hard at times and it sorta saddened me that the chapters weren't very long.

HOWEVER, the plot was something else!

Your idea of Skinwalkers and all were fantastic! I was hooked when it came about and read to the very end. Tiffany; dear god, I hate her, just like I should! When I really got into the plot, I could easily ignore any grammical/spelling mistakes and just enjoy what was going on. And the whole mPreg thing? Screw that I was not a big fan before; this story has gotten me into it! You have some pretty awesome ideas. Thank you for your fic. It made my day!

~Gili

nice concept but you need to beta it.it gets confusing as the english doesn't seem to be so good.

Ok, so regardless of the English and grammar, I have a question for you. Since when do males a have G spot? Is it something weird caused by the Phuu fruit? If so, maybe u should explain it. Also some of the mechanics of the smut sometimes confuse me. You should be clearer in that as well. That aside, I'm enjoying the story. It's cute and I'm a sucker for MPreg. Hugs, Scarlet

LOVE LOVE LOOOOVVVVEEEE IT! I wish that it wasn't the end but what can you say all great things must come to a end. But good work and I hope you come up with something else.

This was a wonderful and amazing story. I love following the journey of Aaron and Leon. They had their ups and downs like any other relationship plus some that were out of the norm. The story was clear to follow.
Now the only critical part I have is the grammar in some areas, but it really didn't phase me...I barely noticed as I read because the story was so great.
I am really happy you shared this story here on AFF. I only hope that you continue to share other stories here so we can have the opportunity to read them. Again great job and I loved every moment of it!
Oh yeah...I am excited to read about Tiffany's punishment...I wouldn't normally say this but I think she got exactly what she deserved.

Nooooo you can't leave it their. More, please more...I am sitting on pins and needles! Great update!!!!!!!!

um so i'm not liking you very much right now how could kill him and just leave it hanging like that i mean what us readers ever do to you except review *tears*

Love It! But he cant die he just cant don't kill him off kill that bitch Tiffany.

LOVE IT! Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work

Oh wow will these two ever get a break. All this stress can't be good for Aaron and the babies and once he see that something has happened to Leon once again...I just don't know. I'm happy he has started to forgive Leon and I am also happy that he has decided not to have intercourse with him. It's a well deserved punishment for Leon. Maybe Leon should just be honest with Aaron about TIffany. Anywho great chapter, looking forward to the next.