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by Anestshia

schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There should me mooooore! -sings!- Was this one done all the way? Was it supposed to end there? Shall there be no sexing? =( -sigh- Oh well. Author knows best. Very good, I like how you write without giving all the information. It really puts the reader "in the moment" I think. Maybe that's why I like your style so much. It's like, you know what you're talking about even though the reader doesn't, and you're letting us peek into your own little yaoi vamp yummy world. Also kewl that you have yet -another- friend (I think this is a different person, yes?) who RPs sexyness with you. -pouts- Wish my friends were writers, and also that kewl. Kudos! -shoves cookie in your mouth- XD -BIABS
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, sexy! That's really cool that you could take an RP and translate it so well to prose. Very cool!