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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Okay! I wasn't expecting all of that to happen so soon! I was really hoping for...I dunno...a little *more* I guess. I hope this doesn't mean the end of the game because I really wanted some torture *bangs fist on table like a spoiled child* Damn! Though, I really liked the blood in this chapter *smiles gleefully* I mean, when she stabbed him in the throat, I was like "YESS!!" because that is totally gory and gross and all that good stuff!
Though, I did feel bad for Jeff because he wasn't honestly a bad person, just in a very bad situation and we all have to make decisions, good or bad, when it comes to that kind of stuff. Poor guy, he didn't really have a chance. Meagan is really good at looking after herself. She kept herself from being the victim! I love stories with strong women, who don't just lie down, beg and let things happen. Thank you for that.
HOWEVER!! The last couple lines of this chapter had me VERY interested as to what the Harlequin meant. It had been a long time since he'd heard the words "I need a doctor". Could this mean that he used to be a doctor? WOW that would be totally bizarre and awesome. And it would definitely make me wonder why he is as he is now. Something bad must have happened! Can't wait.
Love always,
Talitha.
Though, I did feel bad for Jeff because he wasn't honestly a bad person, just in a very bad situation and we all have to make decisions, good or bad, when it comes to that kind of stuff. Poor guy, he didn't really have a chance. Meagan is really good at looking after herself. She kept herself from being the victim! I love stories with strong women, who don't just lie down, beg and let things happen. Thank you for that.
HOWEVER!! The last couple lines of this chapter had me VERY interested as to what the Harlequin meant. It had been a long time since he'd heard the words "I need a doctor". Could this mean that he used to be a doctor? WOW that would be totally bizarre and awesome. And it would definitely make me wonder why he is as he is now. Something bad must have happened! Can't wait.
Love always,
Talitha.
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is wickedly fun to read! It reminds me of a survival/horror video game. I can't wait for your next update!
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Lol, the "harlequin" is such a psycho! But I like that Meaghan is throwing him off with random questions. Perhaps he's not on his game as much as he'd like to think! Great start so far and a really original plot...can't wait to read what happens next!